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writing a new story that i'm going to make good . first i want you guys to tell me what you think the game is going to be about when you first read it. the title is the subject of this post. please reply with your opinion if you read this.

Going to guess the following:

- Nuke war, Red Fang is a gang/group

- Alien war, Red Fang is aliens

- Some sort of horror where man die to nightmares or something, Red Fang is the beast.

- A WC (doubting it, due to a lot of things, but it could be... has fang in the name.)

Honestly thought it could be almost anything, The Fall Of Man part mainly allows this. The Red Fang's Rise can go with a lot of contexts thought, could be a single person, a group, a idea even. Something like a romance might not really fit, but I guess there could be some explanation.

CONCLUSION is that you can make it pretty much anything, just mention what anything is in the description. :D

P.S. Title does draw attention (my attention anyway) and that is a good thing. More likely that people will want to read it.

It's a wolf story.

It doesn't matter what you write it about because if your post is anything to go by, it is going to be dreadfully half-assed and filled with grammatical errors that will make many English teachers cringe in their graves. Now, I don't mean to be overly rude (I'm aiming for a slightly lower bar of rudeness), but this is a writing site. No one is going to take you seriously or want to read your stories if you can't even bother to post with correct grammar...

Please, do not take this as a disincentive towards writing. That would be a shame, and I would never want to discourage someone from picking up the pen... er keyboard. But if you truly care about writing, you will put forth the effort to make your work worthwhile and not make posts that make poor worm ridden English teachers cry in the afterlife.

Geese louise.

Do you really have to have that strong a language.

Thanks for your answers.

 

when you know your playing as a wolf. you become alpha after a short while playing the game and also lose your pack and build a new pack due to human activity. This is part one of three. with this information what do you think happens in the story.

 

I imagine that you'll start listening to our advice, then ignore it.

Before you even think about writing a story, please...proper English.

okay

 

Capitalization. Punctuation.

if your not going to talk about the story information .why are you still replying?

"It doesn't matter what you write it about because if your post is anything to go by, it is going to be dreadfully half-assed and filled with grammatical errors that will make many English teachers cringe in their graves. Now, I don't mean to be overly rude (I'm aiming for a slightly lower bar of rudeness), but this is a writing site. No one is going to take you seriously or want to read your stories if you can't even bother to post with correct grammar..." ~Bucky

We're trying to help you out. If you pay no attention to proper English your story, good plot or not, is going to fail.

i'm improving besides i'm also going to get proof readers this time.

Red Fang's Rise: basically it's about a wolf who has several bad encounters with humans young in his life. this leads to him disliking them. At a point in the game Red Fang accidentally is exposed to some not but toxic waste like stuff that makes him super intelligent. He gathers more animals to form an army to wipe out humanity. He even exposes other animals that he wants to make army leaders to the stuff and make them intelligent.

This story covers his growing up encounters with humans and his forming of the army and the not but toxic waste like stuff that makes him smart.

So it's warrior cars, but with a wolf.

Woot.

"Warrior cars"

Does the wolf beat the warrior cars?

Sounds cool. Just use proper spelling and grammar.

Animal Farm route?

Like i said it's a three part series.In my last post i pretty much explained the whole game.

So just tell me any idea's for the specifics.

Is this... is this Warrior Cats? Dear God!

Shh..shh...I know, but it's okay. Everything's going to be alright...

CURSE YOU WARRIOR CATS FOR RUINING MY STORY BRAIN STORMING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just want to claer this up for everybody.No this is not warrior cats and that warrior cats isn't involved with this in any way.

Oh.

Then it could be cool. As a general rule though, you shouldn't make a series that could be one large games. Series are for a series of interconnected but seperate stories. People making one big story into series are doing it wrong.

Well i am planning on making all three of the games into big long stories. Turning them into one story would probaly not be enough time for most people to finish.

There is no time limit to completing games, lol. There's even a save feature.

Can we expect the same rigorous standards of quality as your current story?