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I was hoping to find someone with time on their hands to help with some minor proofreading and thoughts on my story for Endmaster's Prompt Contest 5. Right now, I'm about halfway done with the story and writing the endings for one of the main 2 paths. The feedback I'm looking for is whether the story is exciting and draws you in, or boring and in need of rework.

My prompt is 19) A story involving a war between two galactic super powers fighting over planet Earth (Humans are the “primitives” caught in the middle). The story is in sneak preview. I believe anyone can read it from my profile, but it's titled "Drops of Jupiter" for now. I'd be happy to share a link and provide some details on how to navigate the story to reach where I have actually written most of it, assuming anyone can help.

I am always appreciative of proofreaders and feedback, and can return the favor after the contest (or do something similar for another contestant, possibly). I may not have a ton of time while trying to finish the 50,000-word story that I committed to for the contest for some stupid reason, but I also love reading and providing feedback to others!

I would love to help proofread and beta read! Message me and share the link!

I can if you want but I think I'm still learning in the field and wouldn't do nearly as well as RK.

I appreciate you both offering to help! Let me know if I can return the favor with either proofreading or some other help/advice! It might be a bit delayed, but I like to comment on others' stories as well!

I'm a tad late to this, it seems, but if you want more feedback, I'll gladly procrastinate more proofread/playtest your storygame!