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What if I wanted a choose your own adventure story that had explicit sex scenes? There would have to be a warning in the story description I take it if allowed.

If the story has other stuff going on in it, aka the fucking isn't the entire point of the story, pretty sure it's fine as long as you put a 7 maturity rating.

If you're writing the story just to write smut, take that shit elsewhere.

Yes I plan to write a full story that includes a sex scene here or there but it will mostly be a fleshed out story with romance and action and stuff.

Okay I'll play.

Well how explicit are we talking and how much of these scenes are in the story? If this is a case of you writing straight up porn, yeah it's most likely going to get taken down regardless of the warnings.

However, we just had someone that claimed they were writing porn and the actual content wasn't even as graphic as some of the other stuff on here. (Though they kept making sock puppets and spamming the site, so they got nuked anyway) so what your idea of explicit vs what someone else thinks is an explicit sex scene might differ considerably.

This is also going to depend on how well written the story is in general. If you're writing some epic scifi story with exterminating bug monsters, blowing up worlds and the protagonist just happens to fuck some purple skinned alien chick in between all that, well that ONE scene is probably going to get a pass.

If you're writing Henry's Hentai Super Funtime Adventure, where you're just writing mechanical descriptions of sex scenes and got bodily fluids leaking all over everyone, then yeah it's going to get axed.

In any case, if you're just going to roll the dice and write this and see what happens, crank up the maturity level to 7 and slap an extra warning on the front page.

Since the story is choose your own adventure. I was thinking there would only be one scene but it would depend on who you get with based on the choices you make. I am a big fan of romance novels so I like the idea of a novel where two characters fall for eachother and usually they have one in them. Depending on the novel for sure some of them just imply there is sex without going into detail but that is boring to me.

In my story there would be action and adventure and the possibility the relationships go sour or even death based on your choices.

My writing isn't the best so but this is the draft of the scene:
 

I wake up with the sounds of a throaty purr in my ear "Good morning tiger".
 
I open my eyes to see an face inches from my own. Pale blue eyes gleaming, long glowy blonde hair resting just bellow delicate pale peach shoulders. Her lips were dangerously close to my own. I found my own lips salivating as I gazed into her eyes holding it for 3 seconds before she leaned in closer pressing her divine lips against mine. They were moist, her own salivia mixed with pink lipstick. When she finally let go I breathed in deeply and let out a relaxing exhaulation. "Hmmmm, you taste as good as ever Rae" I breathed. She giggled at that. Damn she was so sweet. This is why I couldn't get enough of her. Her voice dripped like honey "Same".

Movement stired under the covers. A slender moon like arm wrapped around my stomach "Morning already?" moaned Jessica. She wore a black lacy see through silk top and had short brunete hair, her cute bangs covering her left eye while she rubbed her right eye. She was never a morning person. "Hmmm coffee" she sighed. Rae waved at Jessica "Hey, I made the coffee already, get over here and suck his ***, you can have cofee later".
Jessica looked towards my hips puzzled in a long drown out thought. A shy frown appeared on her face before she bit her lip. "ok" she said.
This was only the begining of what they had in store for me.

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That would mostly end the scene leaving the rest up to the imagination. This could be potentially how the story ends after the adventure is over. The happy ending. That is the safe version without going into more detail of the actual act itself.

Rae waved at Jessica "Hey, I made the coffee already, get over here and suck his dick, you can have coffee later".

Lol.

Yeah, you're probably fine. Especially if this is some sort of happy ending scene. Someone's actually gotta read through everything to get the "reward."

A throaty purr? ... Tiger? ... Oh fuck, it's another Warrior Cats erotica, isn't it? >.<

Those existed? Gross

You missed out on a truly dark era of CYS.

Be glad you live in this Golden Age.

I think the general consensus is that it cannot be a purely smut/porn story, there's other sites for that kind of stuff. If you have a story dealing with other matters that doesn't revolve entirely around sex, it's ok to have a couple explicit scenes here and there as long as they are not atrocious as they often are and I guess maybe put a warning for children? Or don't, might be more fun that way idk

Well what happened to the smutfest?

This is the second time within a few weeks, we've gotten someone asking if it's okay to write porn and then not even delivering.

I demand cringey Warrior Cats porn! ^_^

Yeah... me too I guess

 

Scrubbing that link for now because it occurs to me it is possible you didn't intend to doxx yourself.

Oh crap. Thank you. I didn't notice

Good thing we're merciful around here, last thing you'd want is your real name attached to your demand for cat porn.

Yeah really. Even if it is a joke it wouldnt look good.