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Savagery

10 years ago

I'm currently reading Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness, and I was just wondering what your opinions were on this: What does it mean to be 'savage' or 'civilised'?

Savagery

10 years ago

Oh that's easy! To be civilized, you need to be white! Luckily us white folks are very kind and like to reach out to the savages of varying darker skin tones by sailing around the world, sticking flags in the ground and building shit all over the place. Then all those lucky barbarians get to look at us and see how civilized people live. We're just nice like that ^_^

Savagery

10 years ago

You've made my day Briar XD
Realising all too late that this thread is now going to be full of satire...

Savagery

10 years ago

If I can play White Devil's advocate, it's not like the natives of various areas were entirely peaceful. The Aztecs for example were doing a fine job of massacring surrounding Indian settlements and enslaving them.

White people just had the advantage of technology and unchecked ambition to be bigger dicks to everyone (Including each other).

Savagery

10 years ago

You don't often see "white people" and "bigger dicks" in the same sentence.

Unless its an advertisement, I guess.

Savagery

10 years ago

... That was impressive. Well done ^_^

Savagery

10 years ago

I think people react to their surroundings and do what everyone else is doing. Of course it depends how you define savage and civilized. The French think they're very civilized but they also eat frogs, snails and horse meat so it depends on your perspective. Humans are the only species that kill each other and then don't eat them...

Savagery

10 years ago

... No they're not. Loads of animals kill each other over territory.

Savagery

10 years ago

And sometimes humans DO eat each other after killing one another.

Savagery

10 years ago

Like Christian Bale.

Savagery

10 years ago

Num num num ^_^

Savagery

10 years ago

...Arabs and Asians did that stuff too, you know.

Savagery

10 years ago
They aren't white; they're red and yellow.

Savagery

10 years ago

Oh lawdy dats raycist

Savagery

10 years ago

Playing the leftist liberal role here: It depends on your point of view if you can call a person/group of people 'savage' or 'civilised'. In the general 'Western' policies, ideas like 'civilisation' (not so much used anymore) or 'development' are seen as the manner in which a country, etc. is 'western'. I.e. if a country has a capitalist system, if it has 'modern' healthcare, has Coca-Cola, and such. This means that attempts by governments, development agencies, and such, in their every-ongoing quest to bring civilisation to the Third World, try to make other countries as much 'western' as possible. By for example blasting them through two hundred years of industrialization in a couple of years. 

In my opinion, terms like 'savage' or 'civilised' (heck, even terms like 'development'), are some of the most meaningless words in the English vocabulary. There are so many definitions and views on what these words should mean that it is difficult even to debate them as everyone has a different opinion about it. Overly generalizing example, but go to China and the Chinese will probably say that China is the pinnacle of human civilization. Go to the US and they'll say that America is the greatest nation on Earth. Etc. etc. 

In short, the terms 'savage' and civilised' mean different things to different people, and imply that some people are better than others just because they have different practices, norms, values, etc. Though quite popular in Conrad's time (with Britain conquering the world and such) I don't think that anything meaningful can be said about being 'savage' or 'civilised', that has some universal relevance. 

Edit: Woops, this ended up a bit longer and complicateder than I wanted. Probably should procrastinate with CYS while writing essays and such... :P 

Savagery

10 years ago

That really didn't come off as leftist liberal at all really. You sounded fairly moderate in your explanation actually.

Savagery

10 years ago

'Civilised' is just a fancy word that elitists throw around when they try to get brown people in newly colonized areas to follow their rules and use their technology.

Other than that, there's really no fucking difference. I mean, sure the Aztecs can rip each other's hearts out, but the only thing that made them different from the spaniards was metal and guns. The "Civilized" folk had their own problems too. And I daresay, they were a lot uglier than heart-ripping festivals.

Savagery

10 years ago

"only thing that made them different from the spaniards was metal"

This makes it sound like the conquistadors were arriving on ships listening to stuff like Slayer and Cannibal Corpse during their conquest of the Americas.

Savagery

10 years ago

The way they steamrolled the Aztecs, I'd be surprised if there wasn't some Norweigian Black Metal screams and solos playing in the background.

Savagery

10 years ago
The Aztecs would have lost in the long run due to the technology difference, but the reason they got flattened by Cortes was more because they didn't know how to fight in the European style.

Aztec warfare was more about capturing live prisoners to use as slaves or sacrifices than murdering the crap out of the other guy. They couldn't adjust to the Spanish tactics of ride around on your horse, kill a few blokes, run away, then come back and kill a few more. Cortes also had a good bit of luck in stumbling into an interpreter to help get the other natives on his side; the Aztecs had quite a few enemies. Finally, Cortes had no choice but to succeed or else his ass was going to wind up either in jail or his neck was going to bob from a noose since he was illegally launching the expedition in the first place. Win or die is powerful motivation, and he straight up played the Aztecs for suckers in every aspect he could by abusing the cultural differences that gave him an inherent advantage in warfare.

If the Aztecs lived in a culture where murder was more important than prisoners, Cortes never would have had a chance.

Savagery

10 years ago

Hmm... After reading the comments I had a think and figured I'd throw in a real answer... I think the main difference is that savages do fucked up shit and don't care who knows it... Civilized people also do fucked up shit, but go out of their way to either hide that they're doing it, or try to convince everybody that the shit they're doing isn't fucked up ^_^

Savagery

10 years ago
I mostly agree, but I would change the frame of view. Atrocities are different between cultures. The Aztecs didn't think there was anything atrocious about heart stabbing the living on top of a temple. As awful as that sounds to us, they had a different worldview and values. The European explorers and conquerors tried forcing their cultural framing point onto the new societies, which just simply did not fit. A humorous example, if an alien species visits us one day, and they do not have a cultural taboo against passing gas in public and they begin farting every five minutes while signing international peace treaties with the world leaders on satellite TV, they aren't being barbaric. They don't see anything wrong with their way of doing things.

The Aztecs captured countless thousands of prisoners and carved out their hearts while the victims were still alive. Why? They thought they needed to offer daily sacrifices to a god for the sun to continue to rise. They operated within culturally acceptable terms.

Cortes used every dirty trick in the book, just to get an opportunity to conquer the Aztecs, let alone how he actually accomplished the task. All he needed to justify his actions were money and glory - though he told the Spanish crown it was all for Spain and the king because that sounds a lot better in royalties ears. It certainly made overlooking Cortes' crimes easier. Cortes operated outside his own cultural laws, so he did have to hide his crimes. (Cortes is a very interesting character because he praises the Aztecs as civilized in some letters and condemns them as savages in others. Whatever he needed to do to make him look good at the time. Though from my own readings, I would personally argue he considered them civilized at first (yet not equals) and had his opinion of them degrade over time.)

Multiple popes sent swarms of peasants (several times) to stir violence in the Middle East and die in the desert thousands of miles from their homes and families. The most ironic part was during the 3rd crusade when the "savage" Saracen ruler, Saladin, actually saved Richard I from fever and disease by sending him food and doctors. I'm sure someone will argue the popes thought they were divinely justified while others will say they were power mad murderers.

The Mongolian horde mutilated and butchered everyone they came across that didn't swear fealty to them. At first they started hacking people to bits for land. Then when they had enough to live on, they did it as fear tactics for expansion with the 'why stop now,' mentality.

If there is something to be gained, someone will find a way to justify their actions. So I would argue that atrocities are committed in full-view only when most everyone has already agreed the atrocity isn't an atrocity but a necessity. No one is the villain of their own story.

Though I'd imagine even the Aztecs had dissenters in their midst, no religion is so uniform that everyone buys into it. If it was, Europe would still be worshiping gods like Thor, Odin, Jupiter, Neptune, The Dagda, Wodan, Tom and Jerry, Batman and Huckleberry Finn. Wait...

Savagery

10 years ago

"No one is the villain of their own story."

That reminds me of this skit.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aLJUocaDYw0

Savagery

10 years ago
"Pirates are fun!"

That was great, thanks for sharing.

Savagery

10 years ago

Lol! Poor little Nazis. Must've really sucked for anybody who was a Nazi after the war was finished.cheeky

Savagery

10 years ago

^The Bellamy Salute, the original preferred method of pledging allegiance to the American Flag.

Savagery

10 years ago

Hmm... Wondered why they changed it frown

Savagery

10 years ago

Well, years upon years ago, my history teacher (who I now realize is a white supremacist in disguise wow) had argued with me that being civilized was thes ame as going along a guy's quote, saying roughly that "if a man had his own land, a drink, and a bunch of other shit that apparently you savages don't have, he's civilized".  She went on about how Native Americans were uncivilized right before we went over the facts there was a thing called the fucking Aztec Empire.

Savagery

10 years ago

Because ripping people's hearts out while they're still alive is civilized.

Savagery

10 years ago

Punching each other until the other guy falls from trauma is a civilized career.

Savagery

10 years ago

That expansion was great, but like all Paradox titles it still feels like a board game.

Savagery

10 years ago
Civilized? It's just another form of hypocrisy.

Savagery

10 years ago

Anyone who isn't Greek is a barbarian. 

Savagery

10 years ago

To be civilized is to be blinded by society into forgetting the true nature of humanity, and believing that we are anything more than a talking, highly intelligent animal.

Savagery

10 years ago

Funny. I just started that today. 

Savagery

10 years ago

Well thanks guys for your opinions, whether serious or mocking ^.^

Savagery

10 years ago

To be civilized you conform to the basic notions of society. A savage doesn't.

Savagery

10 years ago

They conform to the basic notions of a different society; a "savage'" just follows different tenets. 

Savagery

10 years ago

True dat. Still a savage to the other society.

Savagery

10 years ago

Google has your answer:

*Civilized: polite and well-mannered.

Savage: Me a member of a people regarded as primitive and uncivilized.