PerforatedPenguin, The Journeyman Scrivener
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11/13/2020
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5/15/2025 8:22 PM
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24 hours to save the ceremony, but is it even worth it?
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Multiple/Full readthroughs strongly recommended.
Entry for Endmaster's Crisis Contest, 2024
Author's Notes
Multiple/Full readthroughs strongly recommended.
Entry for Endmaster's Crisis Contest, 2024
An ambassador to a distant civilization, you return home just in time to find the Sol system on the brink of destruction. Rally your fellow humans, if you can. You've been gone a long time, but they haven't changed, at all.
"In your dreams, you see the crimson spires rise from the fog menacingly... a voice, whispering 'come back' over, and over again."
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Entry for Endmaster's Prompt Contest 3, 2024
Prompt: A story about making a deal with a demon/devil.
Author's Notes
Entry for Endmaster's Prompt Contest 3, 2024
Prompt: A story about making a deal with a demon/devil.
Articles Written
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Recent Posts
End Master's Prompt Contest 4 on 4/15/2025 3:49:39 PMI don't think constructive criticism counts as mean, if that's your whole gripe with the site. If you were truly passionate about writing, you'd see past the banter and apply their advice to better your own works.
The only thing you're passionate about is your own image and ego.
End Master's Prompt Contest 4 on 4/15/2025 3:43:06 PM
You certainly think very highly of yourself.
I've been kidnapped and now I'm here?? on 3/12/2025 1:26:07 PM
Welcome, fellow procrastinator. I'd give you some recommendations, but maybe tomorrow.
...I think the others have got some good recommendations, already. If you want to do some searching for yourself, the top rated of each category is always home to good picks. Otherwise, you could go read some newly created stories and make the author's day with a review, or something.
Hope you enjoy your time on the site.
Thunderdome: Valentine's Match on 3/8/2025 8:52:56 PM
Maybe I'm just used to bad thunderdome stories and bad writing in general (cough cough my contest entry), but I was pleasantly surprised first reading story A, as I found it to be quite solid. Not many complaints, other than the narrator perhaps handing a little too much to the reader, too easily.
Story B was more faithful to the song, and captured the delerium and deterioriating mental clarity of the protagonist well. I found it to be a better entry than A.
I vote B.
Story B was more faithful to the song, and captured the delerium and deterioriating mental clarity of the protagonist well. I found it to be a better entry than A.
I vote B.
Thunderdome: Valentine's Match on 3/8/2025 3:21:07 PM
Don't call me out like that
I'll give them a read over later (not tomorrow)
Breathe: A Short Story on 1/25/2025 9:11:32 PM
Neat story, I found it to be pretty interesting. The flashback was well integrated into her final thoughts and everything seemed to flow together well enough.
I'm reminded of a few videos I saw recently describing some pretty gruesome cave diving deaths. Unpleasant, but props for stirring up those memories.
Prompt Contest 4 Progress Thread on 1/17/2025 1:41:44 PM
I know, it’s unlike me, but I also wrote today.
Prompt Contest 4 Progress Thread on 1/17/2025 1:10:36 PM
I made a new google docs today.
Secret Santa Guesses on 1/13/2025 7:37:58 PM
22, Mystic? How asian of you.
❆ Secret Santa 2024 ❆ on 1/12/2025 11:07:15 AM
Clever and brief reply
