This is just a test game.

First adventure, first game.

It's short, but I tried to keep it funny. Maybe you should try and see what's your First Adventure is going to look like!
 

Also, I'm Brazilian, so excuse me for my bad English... I think it's readable.

This is your First Adventure 2: Second Adventure.

After your first try, you hope that you can do better. You feel that the Gods of the Plane World are now at your side, using the Advanced Editor to make your journey feel better and bigger.

You feel that you can finally try new things, even if you know that deep inside that this life is still probably a trial from the Gods.

But, maybe, just maybe, it's worth your time this time?

Thanks for everything, folks!
You're all awesome.

I was at work, so I couldn't respond.

I'm thinking of expanding this idea to test the Advanced Editor... But it'll be much longer and with lots of "advanced" stuff. I really hope you like this kind of humour.. hehehe...

I think making this little project was pretty cool, and I know it's not the most awesome thing ever... But I wanted to share my first experience with you guys, just because.

Also, I didn't know that the rating from the author counted for anything... My bad. Don't swat me with newspaper please?

Again, thanks! If anyone wants to talk about the game, discuss any ideas or just give me a cool constructive criticism, I'm here all night!

See ya!

First Adventure!

Hi there guys..

.Just wanted to share this little game that i made in less than an hour, just to see if you guys like this kind of humor.

It's pretty short. Like, really short. You can play the whole game in probably less than 15 minutes.

Just see what you think!

I'm RodWarrior from Brazil, and I'm actually making a game on Twine. I'm looking for people that like humor. 

The game will be a more "Sandbox" like, with some RPG-ish stats, and a lot of variable tracking. 

It's probably going to be based around 2-4 villages, and the player can go around looking for quests, that are taken from a random pool. My idea is having lots of those, and each of them changes your stats, give you xp, money and also affects the villages and the others encounters.

If you want to talk about it, send me a PM and I'll respond as fast as I can. We can also chat on Skype, if you are interested in helping.

I need a little help specially in English, since it's not my first language... I can talk pretty well, but I'll probably need some help to really translate the game to English in the hope that you guys can play it.

Anyway, that's it for now.

The game link is: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/first-adventure~21

Thank you for you attention, and nice to meet you!