KEITA'S DUNGEON

First Impression: You know a Storygame will be good when the title is in all caps.

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Story And Worldbuilding: so the story starts out as the character being a... super baby lightning creature? Did I read that correctly? This is an interesting start indeed. The story isn't really much after this. You open doors and chests, defeat monsters and foxes, and then you open a chest, grab a sword, and kill the dragon boss. There really isn't that much to talk about story wise other than that its very childlike writing and humor. One of the foxes is defeated by picking your nose so I guess that's something.

I found it very strange that there was a grammar quiz built into it or something. You couldn't actually answer anything because they were written into the story and not as choices. Maybe this is meant to be some kind of classwork that the teacher puts on one of those higher tech whiteboards that are also screens? It doesn't make much sense otherwise. I can't imagine a teacher writing this but I'm drawing a blank on any other explanation.

Gameplay: Most of the pictures were from a website I never heard of and didn't actually render. There is an item system, which was a surprise to me considering how the story is so simplistic otherwise.

As mentioned before, you can't actually answer any of the questions in the game. You just look at them and there is a link to move on. I found this aspect strange as it was only during a choice where you are battling. Otherwise everything seemed to work as intended.

Grammar: I don't think anything was badly structured or spelled wrong. It looked like it was supposed to be a grammar quiz so that makes sense.

Overall: I'll give it a 4 for effort and good grammar. I don't like giving any lower than that unless it's really bad. I suspect that this will be removed by force or voluntarily.

This would've been a 1, but it went up two full letter grades purely because of how amused I was by a monster being in my nose.

Not the worst storygame on the website. Still pretty bad.

This reminds me of classic CYS.

It made me feel feelings of nostalgia.

Well, I gave it a higher rating than what I initially thought I would give it.

That's not any indicator of the quality I've witnessed. Don't get excited.

This was the best game of 2023. 8/8.

All the photobucket images are broken, kind of gives away that this wasn't proofread or tested at all. (I was not aware anyone was still using photobucket in 2023, but maybe this is why.)

It's kind of cute but there's just not much to it, and I have a feeling it'll be taken down for low ratings.

If this is just meant to be a personal thing for someone you know, you can leave it unpublished in Sneak Peek. (The setting is in Storygame Features, but it would've been there by default when you created the game.) If the title and description are showing in your profile, that means anyone you give the link to will be able to access it.