Poor, Pretty People

An edutainment storygame by Royce

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 6 ratings so far

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level7/8

"Anything goes"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Tags

Based Off A True Story

Historical

Serious

Socially Important

Piss poor pasta for dinner and a shit the size of a donkey. Some whiskey to wash it down, and you've got the perfect recipe.

--- MATURITY NOTICE ---

This story contains graphic depiction of racism, violence, and historical events, and may deeply offend or upset readers. Indulge at your own discretion. This is basically the Columbine Massacre RPG in the form of a CYS about Orlando.

Player Comments

If you're going to do a story about a terrorist at least get the details right. For one, your main character is ISIS which the Orlando shooter wasn't, and a Muslim is definitely not supposed to drink alcohol on Ramadan (or at all). Also, for someone who hates gay people, he sure does want to "fuck em' " a lot.

— AlixeTiir on 6/30/2016 1:58:31 AM with a score of 0

wow

— omgitschowhall on 6/29/2016 10:11:01 PM with a score of 0

The shooter was gay... and not affiliated with ISIS.

— Kiel_Farren on 6/28/2016 10:02:04 PM with a score of 0

Terrible. First of all, there is only six pages in the story. Second, you swear in nearly every link, and every possible moment. You may think that's funny, but it's not.

1/8

— MasonJarGuzzi on 6/28/2016 9:18:08 PM with a score of 0

Artsy. Very fancy. I don't know why but the character, despite being horrendously sick and despicable, was very entertaining in the way he behaved.

Of course, I doubt the real shooter acted so redneck-y.

— swedishlemon on 6/28/2016 8:17:13 PM with a score of 0

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