Summer Lasts Forever

"before you can speak he kisses you"... the choices seem to lie between mouth rape or getting shot by a random murderer, a rather typical "the world is dangerous unless you find one prince charming or Robert Patterson to stay with forever" approach that some mothers like to teach their daughters. Short and interesting, though probably not for the reasons the author intended.

This is a pathetic attempt at a romance. Fuck grammar, let's just analyze this based off of writing; they dated once before and he's instantly kissing her? How much do you guys want to bet this is written by a thirteen-year-old girl?

Also, what was with that *** shit? It's completely pointless and serves no function. Maybe if a substantial amount of time was passing in between lines of dialogue it would work, but just during a conversation? No. Just no. A thousand times no.

1/8

To continue a discussion, this shit gave me cancer.

Or this cancer gave me the shits. Polls are still undecided.

I think any stories that start with a 'do you wake up, or go back to sleep?' but thou must 'choice' are just going to get an automatic 1 from me from now on.

Boring and cliche, choices didn't make much impact, story was very short, full of grammatical errors and plot was weak.

I think this was the first time I picked 2/8.. >.<

It needs to be longer, I just started getting into the story. If it was longer I would have rated it a 5/8. However, since you have cut the story short, 3/8. Sorry kid.

4/8 It was ok the the best, certainly not the worst

Good. No bad. No good. No bad. No, it was just plain fine.

Find the get mouth raped forever alone or get killed, pick one