Player Comments on A Day in the Life of a Cat

Rats with nuclear weapons? That is certainly odd. Funny, but odd. The story itself was okay, and pretty logical, would cat again.

ignore the people who give bad comments its really fun good job!

oh well

Very funny! Love it.

Pretty good, though I spotted a few grammar and spelling errors. But overall it was a nice story! ^^

Meh. Toddles. XD. Or was it Tibbles?

I don't really like it... but good try! :)

The game is excruciatingly short and prolonging the game means doing many actions over, there just isn't enough to do.

This is kind of confusing. This was basically just a short "cat simulator." Nothing too strange...

Not enough choices, you can hardly do anything without the game ending.

well i became an alpha cat when i went to the streets

i like the part when u say u hesitate just long enough to annoy her #SO WHAT MY CAT DOES

this is... AWFUL go #BoRiNg if you agree which i do

i love it this is my10th time playingit

Add a little bit more to make it very interesting.

What the heck is this

It's a pretty short story, with a pretty dull ending (I ended with the catfight). Otherwise, it was good.

This was and enjoyable story but it was short. Make your story a bit longer next time ^_^

not the best, could be better....

YOU ARE NOT AH GODH BUT A LOSAH

IM SO HAPPY (NOT)

All I wanted was a Warrior cat RPG... better than HW but notoriusly short.

LOL!!!! I stayed in the garden. So funny.

Ha ha. This reminds me of my cat. Very very funny and makes sense. Cats are BEAST :)

I really liked it, please make more!

ugh

Good.but can you make it longer?

so short shorter than a doxen

Uyhhhhy

BLECH

CATS ARE ADORBIAL!!!

This is hardly a story!

make it longer with more excitement

short but likable i mean i enjoyed to bite the twins... :D

yay!

waffle waffle waffle waffle
Love it but.....MAKE IT WARRIOR CATS!!!

So short. I didn't find this interesting in the slightest. Yes, i know it's meant to be a cat's life, but seriously?

Not bad acctually.To all the people who says this sucks keep in mind the title and that its a cats life!

BORING. It ends so quickly. Not much of a story if you ask me.

Eh

this needs work, like A LOT

Dude really?

VERY VERY VERY BAADDDDD

I want to go out in the forest and go to clan life

Like it alot

If we could go to the forest it would be awsome

Fun

b etter than the other games i played :S very surprisingly no one finishes stories

I liked this game, but it was too short.

It was pretty good.It was very descriptive,with many choices.

Cute enough!

Awesome! Please continue. :) It's so good. Can you read my story- -Warrior Cats- The Power of Echos
I promise you it's a good story as well. It's based on the series of Erin Hunter, Warrior Cats.

It's okay but not great. Could be longer, but still and enjoyable 5 mins.

AWSOM WHEN I CAUGHT A SQURREL!!!!

I wish it was a little longer, maybe there could be more choices like you talk to the neighbor cat

Pretty good.

So fun! I enjoyed that a lot!

So funny and fun but short :l

Well its cool (not)

So odd i don't get it, Your a old cat. I went to the street to end the cats misery!

Very short, but fun and well-written.

I wish i could hiss at my brother :O

It was cute. :)

8/8... I am enlightened.

fun

I may be overrating this because I love cats so much, but this was cute and short.

Awww!

I thought it was cute but it was very short I love cats :D

This was a lovely palate cleanser after all the Warrior Cats drivel I've been forcing myself to slog through. So nice to see a story with a little personality, not to mention a cat that actually acts like a cat. Kind of short but really cute.

CUTE!

This game is a boring waste of time.

A lot of the "choices" just loop around and around until you pick something else. As a commentary on how boring it is to be a cat, it's all right. As a storygame, it's a complete waste of time.

Quite short and who knew cats had such boring lives

Really good. Like I say to most people, longer!

lol

It was funny whilst it lasted but I noticed both first and third person.

Fun and enjoyable but far too short!

This is so boring! Can you at least let us go into a forest or something?

Not Bad Could Be Better.

its needs alot of work

This is a, well, kind of good story. It's OK, but I feel like it needs a little more detail. The theme is decent, but what you do can just go around randomly. Sometimes, you want to do things that you just can't do. For example, when the twins were fighting over you, I wanted to lick them. When I saw I couldn't, I did the less bad choice, and chose to hiss at them. Then I lost!

Could me much better.

2/8 :-(

I got in a catfight with my next-door neighbour's cat, and I limped home wearilly.

Pretty Dull, but I realise that 1Year Human = 7/8 Year For Cat, so I its not Surprising the cat have a dull life

I loved it! It was the perfect glimpse into a cat's world! I only have one issue with it. I wish you could've let me be friendly with the other cat.

eer not bad but its too short

What a boring Life your cat must have..... Mine has a much more eventful life haha

I don't know what I was expecting but it was decent and short.

pfffft if this is legitimate and someone actually worked on this then you need a new hobby,but to anyone who enjoyed the Erin Hunter books, Warriors, dont read it for it is an insult

I didn't get this at all

It was ok but it was nothing like my cats.

You obviously know cats and how annoying they are. I was able to be one for a minute. Being picky about food, tring to eat minor pets when Im not sastified, and going out to get into a fight and get back home covered in blood, for my humans to deal with it.
Keep up the good work!

ok if your to fight boredom no offince

Hilarious! I loved this: "Such cruel irony that cats should be both fond of fish and phobic about water!" As a cat owner, I've always thought about what exactly goes on in my cat's mind...and this is about what I was thinking. A bit short, but if it were any longer, it might get boring.

Accurate! I like the game.

Well, could have been better, if it was longer and more detailed... meh, it has potential.

That was the best story i've ever read!! Bravo!!!

Awesome Is Speechless! Sort Of...
Well, not too good. Not terrible, but not too good. And there's a part where the twins (a boy and a girl correct) play tug-of-war with you, and it says 'she' twice, implying two girls.
3/8

Ah, well, it was interesting to see what Fluffy's life was like, but it was WAY too short.

I'm just I'm not a cat.

It was nice, but sort of boring.

Cute, cute, cute! I love cats ^_^

I found this games to be quite... well boring.
The reason? It ended so quickly and soon that it didn't give much entertainment to me, and caused me to wonder why you (the author) didn't continue the story.

Too short

Eh.Quite factual.Unfortunately I wasn't too impressed by this. The dream sequence was the best part, but it was kinda boring. Props for originality, but next time have some more exciting things to do.5/8

Tobias-Muttley said it, very accurate! Lots of fun, I hope there is a sequel; more adventurous and longer, maybe!

It's very accurate!

For some reason I enjoy stories from the P.O.V of animals. The game wasn't very exciting, but hey what else can you expect from a cat's life?

Good writing, could be longer

is fine

Cool! You should make A Day in the Life of a Dog too!

It was just kind of average for me. It wasn't horrible because writing wise it was good, but it was just kind of boring for me. I shouldn't really be surprised, seeing as this is based on a life of a cat, but I was hoping for more I guess. Still, not bad.

4/8

U rock

Short but fun.

lame

cat fight

meow?

It was alright, I like the beginning the best. It probably needs a better ending. Fun, though!

Haha, not bad. Increasing the number of options would make this a pretty good story.

It wasn't so bad. Easy way to kill a couple minutes.

I think your need more paths for this cat to go on. Not bad though...

Nice job. Really gives you the feeling of "cat".

3/8

Am I twisted for enjoying the part about biting the children?

You just played me

The same thing keeps happening again and again inside the house. The choices go around in loops. But I like the idea of bieng an animal.

Okay, but a little boring. Maybe add some excitement?

good but needs something more

Well written. Unoriginal, but well written.

i liked it

Make a little longer, otherwise it is good.

A well-written short story indeed. If you write a more serious and longer story this way, it'll be great!