Bloodlines

A fantasy storygame by Endrew

Player Rating3.86/8

"#507 overall, #37 for 2012"
Based on 236 ratings since 11/04/2012
Played 3,788 times (finished 291)

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

This is my first story, that is why I'm looking for constructive comments [even if they are harsh. Lol.]. I'm 14 and English is my third language. Lots of unacceptable grammatical errors, though I've tried to get everything understandable.

This is the story of an assassin. Hope you enjoy it, if you manage to get through my English.[LOL.]

by ENDREW

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