Player Comments on Bloody Story

Actually this was a pretty average day at my school…

Nice descriptions, actually the only major problems I had with it is you had a ton of one slot "continue" choices. Would've been better had you branched the choices out in how you wanted to torture and kill people. Or even if it was just one person you could've stretched it out with more choices rather than giving ALL the description on one page.

Like after you chopped off all the teacher's fingers with a dull rusty knife you had the choice to either scoop out her eyeballs with a fondue fork and skull fuck her to death or get a hot curling iron and penetrate her with it.

It's choices like this that can make all the difference.

There were also a lot of long stretches of blank spaces between text for some reason.

But I'm sure your next story will be better being a demon king tyrant and all.

This is fucked up.

sick. evil

Ah, this was certainly something. :P

What the hell! This is insane!

This game was seriously disturbing; in fact, it was one of the most disturbing games on the site... But still, good torture methods :3

11/10

Quite disturbing. The four year old and the character should have fought to the death lol.

yea it was ...... ugh I wish I could've controlled the torture the killing of the little girl was unreasonable but great

Well, I read through the comments... Apparently this was about bunnies.

... Yeah I'm with End. Torturing and killing people would've been more fun if you got to choose how you do it. I mean you did the whole cutting people's fingers off thing twice. If you're going to be a sadistic serial killer, you might as well be creative about it. :p

Very... Detailed! No spelling or grammar errors, as far as I know. This is the most violent story on the web, I think.

Now that was a nice way to relieve stress.

I was thinking about torturing my mathematics and science teachers..... Just kidding. Nice game!

Mwahahahahahaha

For some oddball reason, I liked it.

Haha. Nice story. Really shows how to torture. Ever tried to make a story using mental torture?

um... I random searched and got this. A bit too violent for my taste.

Love dis.

Gratuitous Violence.

Maybe make it 7/8? This was frigged up horrible. Fun, tho.

Well, I kind of feel bad for killing a teacher because she gave me a D... Maybe added more like: 'She always gave you D's even if you did A quality work' or 'She never liked you. She would always give you detention for things that you didn't do that other students did.' Something along the lines of that.

I did like th bonus stage and the sheer brutality of murdering a child's family and cutting off their noses. The story has the most gory descriptions I have ever seen and even though there is no eighth maturity level, it should still have that.

Reading this with a bloodlust after long day of work or school would be great and I think we need a seuel for more murderous plots and tortures (I swear to God, if I wasn't sane enough, I would be Hannible Lecter Junior!).

Bloody Story gets a 6/8.

This is....amazing. Unfortunately the choices don't matter really and there could be a lot more. But this story is just....great. The grammar is great. It is very sick and twisted but fun to read. Not only that EndMaster posted the best review I have ever seen.

Well done!

Yeah, this is a really good story for kids... Any kid who red this would probably have to get tharipy!

Enjoyed it so much. Clap... clap... clap...

Is there really any effort in this story?
I gave it a 2, for effort.

ALSO next time you make a story like this.. DONT NAME IT A KID AND HIS PET BUNNY YOU MANIAC! U CAN RUIN A KIDS LIFE! seriously you are sick for saying: for the little ones >:T

OMG ok i am scared for life...it was so detailed..... HOW DO YOU KNOW SO MUCH ON DEATH......ITS AMAZING

...I'm scarred for life. :)

Gory is funny. Mislabled gore is also funny. But... eh... while I get the joke, trying to convince people that this is for little kids? Nah, not cool.

This really made me laugh. But what makes me laugh is, at times, inappropriate for kids. This is one of those times.

WTF

Yes, Profusely is a word (You asked during one of the torture scenes, after you cut up the four year old)
Good description, although there was a severe lack of realism and there was absolutely no plot line, like, at all, I do commend you for your excellent description. Next time, try making a story that isn't so ridiculous in nature, much potential here though, you're clearly not that bad a writer.

Where did the bunny go....

Just terrible...

Seriously? The rating should be the highest it can go.

Haha, great story. Made me giggle. (Maturity/description was off though) 6/8! This would be even better as an advanced story where the player gets to use the knives, syringes, razor blades.. (Starts singing 'Murmaider' by Dethklok)

That was upsetting. Don't read this, kids. DON'T.

I was hoping for bunnies...
instead I get *this*.

Why would you say that? You just ripped the story right off the pages. That is what happened. Not your twisted psychopath version. Are you insane?

I did not like this game. I walk in, expecting jimmy to lose his pet bunny and to pray to god to get it back, and then he finds it on his birthday, and they hug and live happily ever after.
No. I get a psycho kid who obviously has social and anger issues, and kills his teacher because he gotta D on his paper.
Why'd you rate it that way?
WARNING. THIS GAME ISN'T REALLY FOR LITTLE KIDS. UNLESS, OF COURSE, YOUR 3 YEAR OLD WATCHES NCIS AND ANIMAL COPS.

I have a bit of a crush on my english teacher, but seriously? I am biased, but I could never imagine a student doing this.

Eh... what's the point in duct taping her mouth if you're just going to have to rip it off to cut her tongue out? Wouldn't it have made more sense to leave the duct tape on and mutilate her nose instead, thereby preserving silence while also causing her to choke on the blood that runs down her pharynx? The way you did it not only failed to maximize her suffering, but also exposed you to a greater risk of detection.

C'mon man... you gotta think of this stuff!

This story is... interesting? I don't know how to put a story that has the psychopathic dial set to max. Liked the end page. That's it, for me.

"THAT STUPID ENGLISH TEACHER GAVE YOU A D ON YOUR PAPER. You decide the best way to settle this is to simply murder your English teacher. Yup, seems like the smartest choice." that escalated quickly.


I like the last page though. the one with "Stop thinking. Stop. I can't stop"

Wht on earth were yo uthinking when you wrote this! Wow! You must have been really board then. How bizzarre!

What an innocent looking name and title... Anyway, pretty decent writing and content was kind of Endmaster-ish. This should have it's maturity level increased to a 8.

Well then. This is certainly a strange story. Good job...I guess? 7/8

I didn't think Love SICK was graphic enough.

Endmaster, the early years.

wth? 4/8

Just in case you wondering about the maturity level, the reason it is rated 1/8 is because as an example they use a math quiz. Well, this story does have a math quiz in it! What's objectionable about that? :)

In responce to JMgskills...

Nope! Page 3 XD

I don't know about this...

This shit is fucked up. Not so fucking normal at all, not so sane either. Definitely not sadistically funny like EndMaster is. Nope, just fucked up all around.

"I hope you enjoy it. Actually, I don't really care." I have a question about that: If you don't care if your readers like your story or not, why did you write and post it? Also, saying this is a bad way to start off your story without me even reading a sentence of it.

Now to the game:

Better than I thought it would be. The spelling was good but the rest was just freaky. How is this an average day at school again? I'm literally on the second page and all of a sudden I'm playing as some psychopath with rage issues. The details of the torture were a bit brutal.

This game's maturity level should not be a 1 because it is definitely not for all ages.

Overall, if we are playing as psycho you might want to develop that a bit better before it you just throw it at us. Also, you could make it longer with pictures.

3/8