Player Comments on Brains

The potential is certainly there... Well written with perfect spelling and grammar, but somewhat lacking in a relatable character and not exactly realistic (as reListic as a zombie apocalypse can be, mind you). A few more choices and increase in length would have been nice.

All in all it was amusing and structured well. There are definitely worse stories out there.

Very funny, I haven't laughed at a story on here for quite some time. It was really quite linear though, I noted a lot of missed opportunities for developing choices in what you could do. I found that a lot of decisions were forced upon the reader, whether they wanted to do that or not, but this was a really enjoyable game anyway so try it out.

I like it! Made me chuckle! I hope you keep making stuff like this!

Funny and decent.

Ah canada, best place to be.

I had a lot of fun. That's certainly what I was looking for.

pretty good

So I died by eating my own foot, wow. I didn’t even have a choice

is gut

insanely short, canada> home depot> keep going> kill zombie stop car> epilogue> done.

the level 3 cast of inter*** was great

COOL BEATH BROHER plz produth more of thith

dead

Oh boy. A zombie game. What a unique idea. You know, I’ve never understood this fascination with zombies that has swept the entire world. I really don’t get it. But that’s okay, because I like a good story and I like reading stories, so I’ll check out this “new and radical idea” of yours…

It is an interesting start for a story with the narrator breaking the fourth wall to start out in the first paragraph. That does really set up the entire story and how the reader will view the story. It also places the story with me, the reader, as the main character. Then it names me. It is an interesting setup, but can be difficult to pull off. Many readers here prefer to either be fully immersed in the story as the main character, in which case you can’t know my name; or they prefer to jump into a story to read about someone else and their adventures – which you cannot do when you’re setting up the point of view as “you.”

There are some decent descriptions in the story. Some could be expanded a bit more. I liked, for example, when the car was described in a little detail. But at the same time, other aspects of what is going on, the area around, and just the setting in general could probably be expanded a bit more. The continual commentary from the narrator was a little annoying, but also a little entertaining, so I’m not sure what to suggest there.

The story did go a bit downhill when I tried to syphon the gas from the car. I’m not really sure what happened with the author there. This is another where it feels like there was a lot of energy, work, and time put into the story at first, but as the pages got on to the later parts of the story, the author just sort of ran out of energy and slapped up a few pages to end it. The weak, scattered references to naked chicks and tits were just enough to really pull this story down to reaching the point of not that good. Oh, the story has potential, it has good ideas, and I think it just needs a bit more effort to really end up in a great place. Thank you for sharing the story with the site.

i was a really good story.
I like that if you marry the trader in the end she has big tits.

this was a fun short zombie game

NOice

Very funny!

i LOVED it

It was short, because I picked a stupid ending, but it was funny! Recommend it!

Bloody Good. Fun short story. Many laffs.

Very funny and awesome!
But to short

I'm very confused... and scared?
I don't know what life is anymore.

Loved how silly this is!

pretty good hilarious epilogue

Ooh, this was great. Hilarious! Maybe a bit overdone in parts, but it had a great sense of humour and certainly one of the more unique zombie games around here. GO TO CANADA!

Here's the flashlight. You're going to get naked and point it at your ass while you run through the building screaming.

Wow 17 children

It was pretty cool, for the short game it was :D but a little to many cuss words in my opinion...

short and unrealistic

People should try the Canada route the ending is really funny. ;)

FUNNY AS HECK BRAHH

Make more options and content then perfect.

I haven't laughed so hard in a week!

it was good just wished it were longer

EPIC short but EPIC

First paragraph instantly made me smile. It raised a few laughs out of me :)
Overall not too bad of a story.

not bad :)

I really enjoyed this I would love to play more just like it from you.

Okay...

This was a pretty funny story. I guess that's all I have to say....

YAY naked chicks rule :)

The description alone caught my attention. Yes, the 'zombie' thing can be overdone, but some people do it right. 'Brains' was funny, and interesting enough to actually finish, unlike some other story games that I've half-played.

Great sense of humour in this game :D

Hmmm, ok, Bwaahhahahahahah that is halarious! Huh? snicker.

Thats the game

It's great. ANd so funny too!

Fun

The ending I got was pretty weird... (and don't ask about it)

It has perfect grammar, includes logic, and overall is a great game.

fun

How come every time I turn around I'm dying this is a bitch nigga game bro

Hahaha. Canada epilogue FTW.

This is one of the better products of CYS.

It wasn't bad to tell you the truth it was pretty good if you ask me.

i was killed by an Indian grocery store employee.

it was good but had too many random endings

Once of the better Zombie Games out there but still not great. I died randomly and it seems like it was becuase the author got bored.

hahahaha...HAhahaha...bear ate my junk .hahahah 5/8 hehheh...ha

You clearly know how to write, the descriptions are of high quality. You said it yourself though, Zombies are a bit overdone. Nevertheless, you still managed to create an enjoyable story game that entertained me for a little while. 5/8

Uuuuughhhh weird...

Having SEVENTEEN kids? I would not be that suicidal.
Anyway, short but not bad.

It makes no fucking sense

I made it to Canada and ate fungas and drew naked chicks wonderful story

7/8 its good but need a inventory system a group of guys guns pictures of morgan freeman and other stuff and pictures of explosions

Fun game, but I got a bit bored after a while.

WTF i just disintegrated my character was right this game does suck

I love it! I live happily ever after! :D

nice

Hahahaha. It was funny, and unlike a lot of other stories that use a lot of irony, this one didn't insult the reader. I had a big grin during the entire reading. 7/8, because I only give an 8 to really emersive stories or those written by Endmaster :)

Funny, and definitely better than most zombie games out there

Okay. I've only gone through it once, but initial impressions are good. My first way to an ending was dying, but even that had some good humor to it, so it wasn't as discouraging as many 'negative' ends are. While the humor wasn't my particular brand of humor, I still found it funny enough to go back and see more.

I was going to agree with the rating it already has, but I have to give you a charm point for your kind of humor. I don't know, maybe you and endmaster should get together. But he's a little different than you. Still ...

Awesome Approves!
I'm not sure if it's the most original idea,but it sure is a ton better than lots of other zombie stories on the site. Great job, but it could have been a bit longer.
5/8

I really wanted that 2+ dexterity...

great story, much epicness to behold.

Not the best or most accurate thing I've seen but it will do

Omg I LOVED this! The rick roll and the eat your foot parts were my faves. XD I laughed way too hard at the description of cooking my own foot. Is it bad that the recipe sounds good? :D? First play-through I got the house ending with the trailer park lady. This was very enjoyable.

that was a great book

It was good enough.

Not bad writing, could be longer with more choices

Haledakota, I would advise you to learn the English language and wait until you hit puberty before you read any more stories.

Too linear to be rated high. I like the coming out of the closet joke though.

what just.... i dont even...

Didn't know I could rate my own story. Anyway, I really like your writing style. It reminds me of my own. But as far as the plot goes, it's freakin' weird. So, me, I give you a solid 6/8.

It's not a bad game. Although there are a lot more zombie survival stories around, this story has better writing than most of them and more (attempted) humor ;)

Tons of fun! Could be better, of course, but it is far superior in both humor and writing than most stories on the site. Congratulations, good sir! :3

HaHa - I love the witty writing. Fun Thstuff! =)