"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played 116 times (finished 16)
"Wade in shark infested water"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Pretty sure this isn't meant for the family-friendly category.
This was pretty intense.
on 9/16/2021 2:00:41 PM with a score of 0
You know, though I can see that it was a game you typed up in three hours, the prose was pretty good and as vivid as I would like to see!
Although it's not for the faint of the heart, it's nice entertainment for a few short minutes.
on 9/11/2021 2:19:25 PM with a score of 0
I do enjoy Enter's writing, so it's a bit disappointing to see a rushed entry like this. He does a fine job at setting tone. There's a certain feel that the reader experiences with his stories, including this one that is immersive and draws you in. Since this story is rather short, it makes it well worth the time, despite the obvious desire for more.
on 9/8/2021 4:54:31 PM with a score of 0
Weird. With moments where flow moves quick and others remaining still like frozen solid, It has a trance feeling at it. With Polish could have to be something more grounded, still good work.
on 9/8/2021 8:56:32 AM with a score of 0
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