Player Rating2.91/8

"#796 overall, #88 for 2016"
based on 75 ratings since 09/29/2016
played 478 times (finished 93)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

This is a story about giants.  I hope you enjoy this story with a mixture of pain, happiness, fear, and stealth.  In this story you will get to sneak past giants, climb out windows, and eat freshly baked cafè food.

Player Comments

This is a nice story. It's good for all ages.
-- Mama on 4/7/2018 3:04:42 PM with a score of 0
It was alright.

-- Neptune on 1/11/2018 7:04:45 PM with a score of 0
"Head to bed
You are very exhausted from your day, so you fall asleep right away. In the morning you got up and went downstairs to the kitchen to see what Edna made for breakfast. She made homemade pancakes. You sit at the table and she gives you a plate. As your eating you talk about what your going to do today. Edna just going to stay home and clean since its Saturday and there's nothing else to do. You are going to see what everybody is doing around town. "May I stay with you, because I don't have anywhere to go." you ask. "Of course you can.'' she said. Ever since that day everyone lived nice happy lives, and no one was ever above 10 feet tall again. Except for the one guy that wanted to stay a giant.
The End"

Yeah, nice story, i sure would love to max size donuts to the size of 'giant.' ;) But hey... too short, how about a sequel? =)
-- TestingJest on 12/6/2017 3:38:49 AM with a score of 0
I think the story is decent, but you could make it more elaborate, flesh out the backstory for the world the story takes place in, add some culture.
Found it enjoyable. 5/8
-- MrSnuggles on 9/20/2017 1:14:28 AM with a score of 0
it was fun
-- Daniel White on 11/10/2016 10:22:24 PM with a score of 0
Um. 10 clicks. Not bad?
-- Crescentstar on 10/25/2016 8:58:30 PM with a score of 0
How on earth does this have a four?
-- mizal on 9/30/2016 5:48:34 PM with a score of 0
A good first time attempt. Lots of grammar errors and some spelling mistakes. There were a few places were things need some more explanation or worded better such as the page where you tell the old lady your story and then your choices are yes or no but you don't know what you are saying yes or no to. but all in all a good first time children's story.
-- BigRonn77 on 9/30/2016 9:35:04 AM with a score of 0
That was pretty bad. Grammar was poor, paragraphs would cut off at random

points, and the story lacked detail and crucial information to help the reader understand what was happening. I'm going to give this a 2/8. Hopefully you will improve overtime. Just keep at it, you'll get there!
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 9/29/2016 10:24:38 PM with a score of 0
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