"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played 55 times (finished 13)
"Walk in the park"
"A well spent lunch break"
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably be between PG-13 and R.
Even after death, there are choices.
An entry for EndMaster's Prompt Contest 2.
I was expecting worse, especially after Endmaster rated this a 3. Honestly It was very fun and enjoyable and deserves much higher 5/8--goodjob
on 3/18/2023 2:33:41 AM with a score of 0
I liked the idea of playing as a ghost in the afterlife. The mechanics of how you interacted with your environment fit really well with the premise of the story, as someone who is not really able to affect things anymore. I also loved the challenge of having to recall details from earlier in the story in order to progress later on without having been warned beforehand- I like challenge elements in otherwise narrative-based stories, and it was challenging without being frustratingly difficult. On the other hand, the writing on some of the pages was a bit sparse, like just bare bones descriptions that could have used filling out. There were also some meaningless or false choices that felt pointless. Finally, some of the unsatisfying endings felt unnecessary, like it would have been better if we had fewer endings to choose from.
on 3/17/2023 1:04:01 PM with a score of 0
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