Of the Struggles Faced Under the Light of a Metal Shrouded Star

A unique storygame topic that I don't think has been done before. The story is interesting and includes a good amount of branching. There are little to no SPAG issues and the writing style, even with snippets of songs breaking things up, lends itself to a smooth and easy read.

I got both Last Duet and the other side of that ending. The drastic differences of a single choice are very notable, and the Last Duet was surprising graphic. The members of the band are fairly flat, although I'm sure that is mainly due to the deadline. This story is about a genre I have little interest in, and focuses mainly on an aspect of the music industry I am fairly unfamiliar with, but nevertheless it drew me an and held my interest throughout.

6/8 just for the title.

Well, it's disappointing that the Christian music industry declined to sell my music simply because there was a sliver of doubt in the lyrics. Especially since the Bible itself mentions Christ saying, "Father, father, why have you forsaken me?"

I suppose I should have done like the real Christian music business and followed the numbers. Maybe hire me some "Christian hot" backup singers, and stick to Millennial skinny jeans, dye my hair, and walk the line.

Never would have thought there would be a game that has a branch dealing with this topic.

I really enjoyed this! The characterization was great, and I thought the way you were told the endings were nice. The length was decent, although I wished it were a bit longer. I'm glad I was able to find my fortune. 6/8.