Mystery / Puzzle
, #97 for
played 639 times (finished 120)
"march in the swamp"
"Make sure not to blink"
"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
A classic murder mystery.
It's a monstrosity.
on 3/12/2020 3:11:42 AM with a score of 0
There's no consistent plot to this at all. Your sister is apparently dead, I guess, and you just have these potions. You turn into an animal for like three seconds then do nothing else with it. There's no point to it at all. You find the body of Patrick Ollins, who's never mentioned before, but apparently you know him by name. Then you're all of a sudden searching for his murderer? Also, when you're searching the wallet, you find the ID of Jamie. Who is Jamie?
Nothing makes sense here and this is not a story at all.
on 1/7/2020 6:43:06 PM with a score of 0
The grammar was very bad, and I thought that the story was difficult to navigate, only plus side is the use of items
on 11/8/2019 7:18:11 PM with a score of 0
Take the potions and use the Animal one. Transform into and animal for no goddamned reason at all except the author is a furry, click the only link you can click until you're told to use the Human potion.
Take the items. Don't bother looking at them. You won't need them for anything, but you must have them all for the link to MOVE ON to appear. Click that.
Apparently you're supposed to identify a murderer now. Nothing was ever said about a murder but okay.
Don't worry about talking to any of these people, just go to pick the murderer and then go down the list of names until you win. The End.
So to recape: You drank a potion that turned you into an animal, walked down the street to reach a building, drank a potion that turned you back into a human. Picked up some random things you found lying around, and entered a room full of people to randomly accuse them of murder. No further context was given. There is no story here.
I apparently gave this a 1/8 years ago, but still feel like that was nowhere near harsh enough. This wouldn't last a day if published today.
Mousepaw is somewhat legendary for her cringe even when we're talking 2014, a year of nothing but. So there's that, if you're browsing the site for historical research purposes.
on 8/27/2019 12:28:31 PM with a score of 0
i was only an animal for like a sec but ok
on 11/7/2018 8:13:17 PM with a score of 0
This was a good story. It was short but fun.
-- Far dal on 11/2/2018 8:00:36 PM with a score of 0
First story? I don't see the reason how this could be any good from the one's I've seen that are bad that are very good
on 10/26/2018 8:57:31 AM with a score of 0
A good story. I like how easy it was to finish, and how the facts were put in a succinct, list-like manor. Short, but still good.
on 10/25/2018 11:37:54 PM with a score of 0
This is a pretty good start. The plot is not too developed, but I like the murder mystery concept.
on 10/25/2018 6:09:53 PM with a score of 0
Guy#1: "Hey friend, will you kill me?"
Guy#2: "No problem!" (kills Guy#1)
I have so many complaints about this storygame.
on 10/22/2018 9:49:09 PM with a score of 0
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