The Quest

I played through it just for my point

Lacks end game links. Not terribly written, but not very interesting either

Pretty cool, except I do not understand when the time period is.

I FOLLOWED THE GOOD THOUGHT AND LET THE GRIFFINS BE FREE.

It's pretty good. Though short, it's pretty immersive and generally not bad. Though I have no idea who Reeves or whatever his name was it's a bit to easy, I thought it was pretty decent.

Mediocre already, I'm deducting the remaining points because you forgot an End Game link at the end of the other endings.

You should've had an End Game and Leave Comments at the end of every death page, not just at the end. Also, it could've been loads longer and had longer pages. 2/8

It's not bad, but I didn't really seem to care about my character so it was all a bit meh

The griffin put the clues ;)

Not nearly as bad as it seems to be rated. The pages are a bit short and there are some problems with the links, but all in all, the adventure stayed coherent with plenty of choices throughout.