Player Comments on The Road to Glasgow.

This was pretty good! There are enough twists to keep the reader interested, while also having a good balance of humor and spooky elements to be a quite a enjoyable read. I also came across no issues with grammar, or at least ones that are readily apparent.

So, in closing, I feel as if this is a decent story.

Humorous, gripping game and every decision to take interests and excites you to think cautiously yet wittily!

Better than expected!

This game was entertaining to play. It wasn't exactly novel in any way, but it was humorous and kinda fun.

Overall, not bad.

Bravo!

This was great! I’m trying to write my own story, and it’s going so slowwwww, I can’t imagine how people can do this!!! I loved this story!

And yey made it to gasglow

Wow... I enjoyed this so much! Although I think you should add pictures on the items, it was really good. Keep it up!

Severely limits your choices.

Taking advantage of the advance editor helped out with making this have a more proper text adventure feel. Been a mem since 2007, but you have only wrote two story games, how unfortunate.

This was one of the best, most hilarious story games I've played! Amazing job! Keep writing!

I liked it it was a pretty good story

It was oddly humorous for such a simple and short story... and oddly random. If there was one thing I would've like to see more were longer pages with more descriptions and possibly, much more fun lines, but oh well!

In short, I found it an ok story with a oddly appealing sense of humor, I rate it a 4/8.

Good luck on your next storygame.

random and kinda confusing at first, but not too random and confusing to lose interest. 5/8

The first few times I was confused until I realized i needed to tap the items (you should tell people to do that in the discription)
Anyway it is a decent game, I won't play it again and again.

cool game fun i tried to die every way i can because it was so much fun!!!#!!!$!!$$1@3#$@!!!!!! read it you will loveee it!!!$$$$$$$$

Aw man, got an ending, but I was tricked by the text. Going in again.

Haha lol. I found the ending funny. I liked this a lot

It's fun, freaky, and funny. But I'm warning you, it's pretty darn hard.

very fun and entertaining all the way through. And I prefer stories like this where there isn't a ton of paragraphs to read through before making your decision. Great job on this one!

There a macanic in the volcano :( I cast fireball at narraroitor

Nice star wars twist. It was preety easy too, if yu use common Sence.

Great story and interesting narration style that adds to the immersion in the game.

Pretty funny, I liked it.

Wait, is there a good ending? I died the romantic way.

Hilarious and random!

A bit random and short but entertaining in its own way.

SOOOOO FUNNY! LOVED IT!

It made very little sense. However it was presented in such a way that I couldn't help but enjoy it.

I LOL'ed

Pure insanity, but I have to admit, it was fun for that very reason... not terribly difficult or very long. Really enjoyed your narration style. xD It was kind of like... "I know this makes no sense, screw logic, just enjoy the ride, man!"

Ha Ha Ha. XD I loved this, here, have an 8! ^_^ I can see why some people wouldn't like it, but as an avid fan of randomnese stories, yours is top notch!^_^ This is better than your other story, I greatly enjoyed your puzzles.^_^

It's hilarious. I mean, yeah, a lot of people come here expecting to see stories with plots and imagery, but it is what it is.

lame

No development. No depth. No purpose. No fun.

kinda weak

However made this is a MAD SCIENTIST. LOL...

i won yay awesome

It lacks description of any kind. Who is the main character again? You never really told us readers. We also don't know what he's supposed to be doing out int he middle of no where.

I love it. The humor is wonderful (nom nom nom:) I agree that the story could use some touching up. If you polished it, this story would be great.

Funny I loved the Monty Python reference.

Wow, Damn good.

Ay yup

Woooow you have a great sense of humor. This is exactly what I need to brighten my day. It was a little bit short, but that's the way it should be. I just can't shake the lust for another glowing object.

5/8 for the definate hilarity factor. However, the story could have been better, and the part with the cultists was kinda random. Also, I think it needs to be longer. So, it needs work, but it was REALLY funny.

5/8 Pretty good. I thought it was hilarious when you choose to kill the narrator and it sayus: "You know that never works out. And it's rude too. The narattor is displeased." lol! The ending seemed to leave it open for a sequel. Hmm....

Fun story though it needs a little bit of work to really shine. Hope you write more. I'm moving this to the horror category.

Good quality writing, but the story could use some polish.
Would be a nice addition to the new horror category.

eaten by a kangaroo lol, arent they vegans? lol anyway, i can see you put some effort into this. though a bit of randomness plagued the realism. great use of items though. build on this work and make a better story next.

Interesting writing. More flemish rabbits and kangaroos... I thought it was a bit strange, but it had a good amount of choices in it.

You win again. *solemn*