The Tapestry

I am extremely offended. I am NOT offended by the content of the story at all, that is really tame, but everything else here is highly offensive.

I am slightly offended that that author actually thinks that this story is so edgy it will make anyone uncomfortable. Although wrapped differently by this author, these religious themes aren't exactly new ideas, and have been played out multiple times and in many ways. As a Christian, I am more offended that the storytelling in this game is so bad it makes my head hurt.

What totally offends me is the horrible writing, grammar, and spelling mistakes that permeate this "story". (Yes, this is so bad calling it a story is a reach.) There are so many errors one must almost assume it was written in some kind of code.

The description says I will get lots of "tolls" in this story. Yes, it took a toll on my mental well being. After starting this story, I began hoping the author meant TROLLS, because that would have made the story fun. But no, alas, the author meant "tools", which were no fun at all, and they couldn't even be bothered to spell check the description.

The item use was very clunky, and made the game tedious.

Overall, not good, not close to good, not even ok. Bad, very very bad.

It's fine, but the grammar and spelling is so bad...

The grammar just hurt my heart and soul

The entire thing made no sense and was so full of typos. Spell checkers exist, you know.

This game certainly is a relic of the site and should not be up by today's standards!

The grammar really bothered me.

The premise is honestly absurd beyond belief.

Truth be told the only thing I found offensive is the constant spelling and grammar mistakes. I personally also found the whole thing ridiculous, though I am not personally super religious, I know enough that this made me laugh at how ridiculous it is.

Interesting to say the least.

Awesome, I like how you have to use items. I scrubbed aside most of the grammar issues in my way, but it didn't soak much up, so it wasn't that big of a deal. I honestly didn't understand half of it though, not from word misspells, I just don't understand this type of stuff.