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plzy draco the vampire in fantasy

Who is that and wat do you meen by "play my story!"?

oh ya and that is a nice pic

 

Yes it sure is but not as nice as the one I made you.

Yah, I'm sorry, but I didn't really like it.

Its not all that good....

It tells you what to do. You can barely die! (Once)

Its so bad!!!!!!

Yeah, giving away what to do is not good at all. The game I'm working on (I'll work on it more over the weekend) has no wrong turns, instead you choose what to do and see and find out your ending. It will have multi-endings of course. I hope it turns out good.

Also, a story doesn't have to have perfect grammar, but it has to be readable.  Yours has no grammar.