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never seen this website before, but I wanted to make a choose your own adventure story, so... here I am, I guess.

Welcome!

All the best wishes to you and your storygame!

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Welcome to the community

I find it ironic that you are the one who wrote this :P

Wanna make a good first impression ^-^

Cheesecake makes for an excellent first impression, trust me!

What is it with you and the cheesecake? I have not failled to notice your story comments btw.

I prefer not to go into detail. It would be the longest fifteen minutes you've spent reading something that feels more like a steady stride across a balance beam that wavers every few seconds. Anyway, it's just decent in general... enough to get anyone in line.

o: cheesecake

I'm sure he's full of useful advice on what not to do by now.

Welcome! Let us know if you have any questions.

We have generally pretty high standards and critical feedback is encouraged here, so make sure you proofread and all that. I'd advice reading and rating a few of the more popular stories to get a sense of what readers are looking for and what the editor is capable of.

"I'm not sure what this is yet, but I'll try to keep at least the first parts of it short so the reader can get to making choices faster. It's in a more mature category now because I might include some violence, gore, or themes that people may be sensitive to."

Don't worry about cutting out story, it's the most important aspect of what you're writing, so don't hesitate to fill up pages with hundreds of words. We've got a community of readers!

Check out some of the higher rated storygames. You'll notice they all have one thing in common: they were finished. So many do not. That's the main weakness most of us have (including myself): laziness. If you can finish what you start, and you can put coherent sentences and ideas together, you'll well on your way to CYS immortality (as a soldier in EndMaster's undead army).