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Accusatory comment on my barely started story

12 hours ago
I just got on this site to make a final project for college. I started making pages laying them out to connect to their prospective choices and whatnot. Someone played it and at the point they played I had barely any actual content down. Again just pages connecting to one another so I could go back and add more detail and stuff once I had my structure all set. They said "It smells and feels like AI slop (slightly modified i guess)." is there any way for me to get rid of that or am I just stuck with that accusatory comment because someone tried my extremely rough outline of a project? I wouldn't be so upset about it if I didn't want to make the story better but it just puts me off.

Accusatory comment on my barely started story

12 hours ago

     You already asked about this in the other thread, you don't have to make a new one for it.

Accusatory comment on my barely started story

12 hours ago
It seems you removed preview, so now we can't look at it to see if it's AI or not ;).

Accusatory comment on my barely started story

12 hours ago

     Well first of all it was in big blocks, AI makes nice, neat, and clean paragraphs that start looking worse only when you begin to read it and realize it's AI. I seriously doubt this is AI work, and I didn't read a sentence.

Accusatory comment on my barely started story

12 hours ago
Read a bit of it and my God is your writing the most bland soulless garbage ever. It's not even funny bad like that Death Note game was, there's no soul in it at all. Probably not AI because at least AI writing is competent on a technical level with proper paragraph formatting and actual dialogue rather than just summarizing interactions.

Accusatory comment on my barely started story

11 hours ago
Removed it and posted in the other thread, didn't realize you had a second one too.