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Hi, i think i get straight to the point to avoid any confusion. 

I was thinking about writing a choice your own adventure story about a schoolgirl (the player), living in a world filled with monsters that eat humans. 

The main focus is on comedy: because the main goal is to survive one single school day without becoming someone's food. Which is ridiculously difficult in this world. 

However, it will contain a lot of elements of "vore". I plan to describe the bad ends very detailed. There will be no sex, blood, or scat.  But "cannibalism", soft nudity, food transformation and similar will happen. 

Is this allowed on this site using the highest maturity rating. Or does this break some rules?

I maybe described it wrongly. It not planned to be erotic. It's as said a comedy story. It just can be seen erotic for people. I not plan to write a porn. Else i would not ask to upload here. (I write a lot of porn stories on other side) 

But i think i may should just use twine as usualy;) 

You right. Maybe i just remove any details all along. I just know a lot of people that are already satisfied if i write: "X get eaten alive and loses a shoe." 

With details i mean. As example i describe how a monster grabs and player sticks an apple into his mouth and shoves him into the oven. Much further I actual not plan to go. 

Or another example: The player opens a cabinet, is pulled inside. The closet shakes for a few minutes and a little later only the clothes fly out. So it's more like in cartoons.

 But as we all know, there are people who already consider this too erotic. 

As said i'm still playing around with this concept. As I want to write a comedy survival story about something sounding easy on paper. That ends up beeing ridiculously impossible. 

Wow, this community is garbage if you play this card:) I have a lot of fetishes darling. Not that it matters much if I ask a legitimate question. Is Hansel and Gretel porn for you? Because it contains all of the mentioned topics.

As said I even admit I'm also writing porn on other sides. I just wanted to ask, because I planned to use the knowledge I acquired writing commissions for round about 10 years now. To write a serious comedy that makes fun of all the stereotypes I learned writing for all kinds of people. ;)

Because stories involving these topics are very ridiculous. You can have a lot of fun if you just skip the "erotic" parts. But people like you are the true creeps. Because you judge people barely on sexual preferences!

Was unaware that cannibalism was considered a "sexual preference" :p

No. Keep your weird disgusting fetish off the site, thanks. 

Sad thing is, if you'd just written the story and had people being randomly eaten like this, no one would've batted an eye. The fact that you had to mention the sexualized terms for them as if the idea of cannibalism is inherently sexy is what's creepy. :p

The reason I mentioning it is, because I have written stories for people that are into this fetish. That why I think knowing what people consider erotic, I know to be careful.

But you people already showed me you are not mature enough to even seriously discuss with me. How I can transform these elements into a comedy making fun of the scenes happening in this kind of stories without going too far into details. It's not easy to make fun of porn topics. 

So, you were going to make fun of porn topics by describing them really explicitly? I don't think that's how it works.

... They aren't porn topics unless you go out of your way to make them porn topics! >.<

It's like saying, "I'm thinking of writing a story about an adorable puppy. Would that be allowed or would it be too sexual? Because I know a lot of people really want to fuck puppies... Not me, obviously! Totally not me, but you know, a lot of people have commissioned me to write stories about fucking puppies. Bloody degenerates, am I right? I mean, obviously the story about the puppy will have some sexual elements to it, since everybody sexualizes puppies, but mostly it's played for laughs... Why are you people looking at me weird?"

Alright, bye faggot 

True but I'm an honest person. As said I write a lot of porn allowing all fetishes people wish to see (except childs). And there are people that are into this stuff. They are very nice people if they not consider it for real.
Writing commission I often laugh a lot about the themes people want me to write. These stories would be quite funny if you skip all the parts meant to be "erotic". It's like reading the story script of a bad porn. And I thought I may, could use this to write a comedy that makes fun of this.

But if you read how aggressive people react to this simple question I think the real creeps are the people that judge people they not even know!
 

Hard core porn, everyone! ^_^

The monster slammed the school girl against the wall with one of its oversized hands and with the other hand punched a hole into her body grabbing her gooey innards and started snacking on them right in front of her face which displayed nothing but shock as it was just the adrinaline of the terror still keeping her alive.

As a piece of bloody intestine squelched between the creature's misshaped teeth, it said "Ahhh, I can taste your delicious fear. A pity this will be over soon."

"What the fuck?!" another voice shouted causing the monster to turn around, drop the school girl's bloody body and it was that moment he knew he fucked up.

"I leave the lair for an hour and you're eating school girls again! Where did you have this one hidden?" a similar monster with longer hair with a bow in it exclaimed.

"Um, honey it's not what you think! She's actually an adult, cosplaying as a school girl!"

"Adult, my green ass! Her tits aren't even fully developed! That girl is fourteen if she's a day!"

"Alright, alright, but you know how the meat is so much tender at that age!"

"Yes, I'm well aware and once again YOU didn't fucking share, I swear you're the most selfish thing in this world! Get out of my way!"

The female monster pushed her husband out of the way and grabbed a fistful of organs from the dead school girl. She released a sound of delight as the girl's heart tickled her taste buds.

"See baby? I left the heart for you, I was going to share." the monster said.

"Shut up and go out and get another one. I want a fresh one next time." the female monster ordered as she easily crunched up the girl's bones.

"Yes dear."

Isn't this a little too erotic?

I'll probably add this one to the short story thread later.

So in his exile from the glorious lands of CYStia, MC traveled to the faggy lands of CoG hoping to find sympathy in that land of degenerates.

(That's all that someone was able to get before the thread was hidden and deleted)

And so turned away yet again, MC retreated to a land so desolate that only the old monuments and temples of a much greater master stood tall enough to be of relevance.

Infinite Story would be home.

Lol.

"Category: Fantasy"

This reminds me of the Dark fantasy vs grimdark debate an awful lot...

Of course he's German lmao. 

... "I maybe described it wrongly. It not planned to be erotic."

Description: A vore/cannibal world filled with cute girls.

Again, sad thing is, if I'd seen a game with a description of, "A young girl tries to survive a single school day in a dystopian world filled with cannibals and flesh eating monsters." I'd think, "Sounds interesting." But for some reason he thought it would be better to go with, "A vore fetish game filled with cute animal school girls, with very dark and perverted themes... But it's totally not erotic." :p