Gay and DepressedER!!!

My date let me die after I saved him cool-

I am god now.

Too hard character so depresssed

i told my german class i was gay, they didn't care so i killed myself.

Omg i love this so much i played it multiple times even though i know whats gonna happen. it's amazing!

11/10 relatable ^-^

It was so enlightening when I lost immediately for speaking german

A short story about how I fail to make everyone interested in me being gay and die.
Considering the longest path was 5 pages long, there was hardly room for any character development, if there were any characters who existed for more than a sentence at all. Therefore it was rather impossible to get invested in any of the characters.
A highlight would be the very concise background building. The choices on the first page very accurately suggest that the main character is a university student without extra words wasted, which is appreciated very much.
Alas, there were more faults to be seen in the two minute’s worth of reading than the good parts. For one, the story game was linear. There was already a great lack of length, and even with a story so short you decided to make some pages have only one choice. The variation of lengths between paths was also too great, with one of the paths at the start having only 3 pages and no choices at all.
Overall, this could have been a better story if its ending was not stuffed to the reader so soon. The background ideas of the story was interesting, but none of them were developed before the story ended.

Lolfunnymuchmemesverygaylolbitcoingay

It was gay, and I'm extremely homophobic.