Immsmore Gallery

Well, I'm not really sure what to think about this. It appears to be gallery, as the title states, of various creature descriptions.

There did not seem to be any story at all. It started with a description of a banquet room, and then the choice of creature descriptions. It should be noted that the descriptions seemed well done, but it would have been nice if there was some interaction with them.

Unfortunately, since there is not really any story or even game elements, I have to rate this rather low.

"Please don't play unless you've been linked through the event, otherwise the context won't make much sense."
Clearly I did not listen and curiosity got the best of me.

This is defiantly less of a story and more of a gallery (as advertised) which is a interesting unique route to take and seems more like walking a museum reading the little info cards than reading a full story, different but I like it. The descriptions of the creatures and some of the smaller interactions like the satchel and arm band are very detailed and vivid but the repeated lines with and within the "is it alive" do break immersion in a piece that would do fantastically with more variation.
The world you've created in this beautiful gallery should totally be presented fully and explored more, I really hope to see more from you and these "Subeta Immsmore Event"(s).

Really cool idea but didn't seem like much of a cyoa

Interesting descriptions of the beasts but nothing more

Very... spellbinding. Unfortunately, it seems even the internet does not know what this event is. But pretty good nonetheless.

Strange, but interesting, I guess....

Strange. . .

... mystifying?

Pretty good.

This is... actually rather fascinating. I'm very curious as to what's going on and I find the descriptions admirable, even though I'm disappointed to see that you used the same part (about the shallow breathing for "is it alive") for almost every creature, save the Harlequin Jester.

Unfortunately this is ... not a full story and nothing is explained. I don't understand why you posted this or what event you're talking about. You really shouldn't post something fragmented like this, and if you're going to regardless, you should explain more fully what it's for.

I've never heard of the Subeta Immsmore Event, so I dunno wtf it's about, but you... certainly -could- have something here if you'd complete it.