Revolt

A sci-fi storygame by adambruiser

Player Rating2.75/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 71 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

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In January, 11th, 2012, an alien race left they're planet for ours. They attacked and enslaved the entire human race. You where one of the lucky thousand that escaped. In your town Argo a revolution is starting. Your family? Dead. Your two cousins garret and Jake escaped with you but the others are dead. That girl you liked? She's a slave now to the oligarchs who run the place and is used by them for they're own sexual enjoyment. Your friends? They hang in cages from the ceiling in the arena knowing one day they'll be down there fighting a giant poisonous lizard or swimming with a giant piranha. Welcome to new earth.

-Updates-

-quotations

-fixed ending to fit for possible sequel

-moving more towards human help

-plot development

-new clip and video military file (ending)

Player Comments

Well, it seems like some effort has been put into the game, but a lot can be done to improve the quality of the game.

First, have more backstory. Be more in-depth with your story, explaining fully why the player is in the current situation with a backstory.

Second, make your story less linear with more branching, as that would allow players to immerse themselves in a story. What's the point of a CYOA if you can't choose an option that you really want?

Third, don't have deaths that are too sudden, like a one liner, e,g. A rock falls on you, you die. GAME OVER.

— Xt1000305 on 3/28/2013 11:55:43 AM with a score of 0

Here it goes. I'd suggest, if you want to do a 'sequel' that you actuality start from the beginning, like this one, and fully expand it. Get someone to proof read out the spelling and punctuation errors. There's a good basis for a story here if you clean it up some. Also, I found the investigation of the room needed work. Saying almost everything was of no interest got on my nerves.

— Mynoris on 3/7/2013 12:27:17 PM with a score of 0

Not bad. A few grammar errors in the synopsis so I was wary before starting, but the story doesn't have so many that I lost my mind lol. I died several times. Kept hitting back and choosing different options until I got a death that felt better than the one-liners. More detail on the battle/fight scenes would be cool. Overall, not too shabby. Enjoyed.

— Lallafa on 11/14/2017 11:08:41 AM with a score of 0

I mean, this story has HUGE potential, but it only has one ending, and every other thing ends up with you dying. I was at least hoping there would be more endings, and like I said before, HUGE POTENTIAL. Author, please add more to this! It would be so great!

— Ethananous512 on 11/9/2016 1:18:01 AM with a score of 0

That ended way too suddenly, I'm not sure what happened

— corgi213 on 1/1/2016 11:12:23 AM with a score of 0

I simply activated the omega bot, and he killed me.
Wow.

— EarthCollision on 2/26/2014 3:17:46 PM with a score of 0

I don'rt really know what happened at the end . . . leading a robot army would have been cooler if you actually got to chose different objectives and tatics

— Kwism1127 on 8/31/2013 8:21:43 AM with a score of 0

It's good certainly not the best but a tad short but good job.

— PenguinSharpshooter on 5/2/2013 11:05:04 PM with a score of 0

Not bad. Pretty linear and just a suggestion make more than one path to win or different endings than win or die...