The Underworld of Lichens

Hmm, I couldn't help but feel that this game could've had more to it. There's hardly much dialogue in pages and the story itself felt a bit hollow. The main character in particular didn't have anything in terms of character and it was hard to be invested in the story at times.

The battle itself ended in one choice as well :p Ah, was there really any need for either one of the items at the end? I could see much untapped potential in this game, but I suppose for a bite-sized adventure, I didn't think it was horrible.

Lichen? A lichen is a composite organism that emerges from algae or cyanobacteria (or both) living among filaments of a fungus in a mutually beneficial relationship. I assume you mean a lycan or lycanthrope, a human capable of taking on the form of a wolf, whether it be by will or an uncontrollable transformation.

Aside from that, your story leaves a lot of questions unanswered. Why are you in the underworld? Who is Lord William? What relationship does he have to Lucifer? How do you feel about being in the underworld? You could make the game a lot more interesting if you took the time to answer these questions.

Another grievance I have is the predictability of several choices. Make it difficult for the player to determine which one is the right choice (but don't make the outcomes of the choices so random that the player couldn't reason anticipate such an outcome).

If you were to fix those problems, it would be a rather nice game.

This is linear, has bad grammar, no plot, no background information, and no buildup, so yeah, 1/8.

Lol I got shield and chain mail.

this is soo hilariously dumbbbbbb

This storygame needs more detail. Other than that it was ok

way to short and way to easy. The shield and chainmail were pointless.

So... What's the point in the shield and chainmail?

Wat too short, can't say much.

makes you think, not just play. Remember, when you come upon Lucifer - attack! Don't wait for him to move. You have to be strong and fearless. Never give him a hold.