A Cup of Tea

Player Rating2.94/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 261 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

You, the reader, have a once in a lifetime chance to have me, Tea, fall in love with you! Test your luck, ladies, gentlemen, and everything in between!

Player Comments

It was actually very well written, but there were a lot of flaws outweighing the interesting and charming writing style you used here.

First of all, there were a few spelling/grammar errors floating around every once in a while, but not many. A quick proofreading and spellcheck can easily fix this small problem.

The character development was decent, but definitely not great. I would have had more length so you could bave added more emotion and backstory and time for the characters to have feelings the reader can actually think of and feel for the characters.

As Plelb stated, this was very short and suprisingly didn't fall under the 1/8 length category. Next time, spend more time on your storygame and make something longer, something you can be proud of.

I'll say 4/8, make it longer and fix the errors and you could have something really good here :)
-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 11:17:11 PM with a score of 0
... I really hope that wasn't somebodies actual phone number. >.<
-- Avery_Moore on 7/24/2020 5:15:31 PM with a score of 0
The idea is there and your writing seems good. But this is chooseyourstory.con, not readastory.com and this has only one linear progression. This could be amazing if you took a moment to write out more branches and length into your story. Also ends way too soon. Basically this is a good start but needs to be finished.
-- jbstory on 12/10/2018 9:07:33 PM with a score of 0
You just made yourself a god and then said your name was tea.8/8
-- Mistery on 3/16/2018 10:49:53 PM with a score of 0
Uhm... What? So I fell and now she can never love me? Why would that be a bad thing? She helped me up and offered me tea. Now would be a good time to start a conversation!
-- Mette on 1/6/2018 10:57:30 AM with a score of 0
not too bad! wish it was a little longer but it was definitely cute :)
-- narwhalsswimmin on 12/21/2017 10:10:32 PM with a score of 0
That's it? I was hoping for a longer story with more choices.......I'm a bit disappointed to be honest. But good effort I guess.....
-- Tali on 10/11/2017 1:33:21 AM with a score of 0
Could have been way longer. There were few errors, which was nice, and it was funny and charming, but I felt it was too short for me to enjoy. And there was only one good ending, all the other endings were the equivalent of a 'you died'. I did enjoy what little was there.

-- SixtySnakes on 8/27/2017 8:22:04 AM with a score of 0
Too short, too little story. But OK, because it was a little humorous and only took a minute or two to finish.
-- Troppy on 6/17/2017 4:36:45 PM with a score of 0
A bit too short for my liking
-- Anonymous on 5/9/2017 1:42:58 PM with a score of 0
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