Bloody Story

Actually this was a pretty average day at my school…

Nice descriptions, actually the only major problems I had with it is you had a ton of one slot "continue" choices. Would've been better had you branched the choices out in how you wanted to torture and kill people. Or even if it was just one person you could've stretched it out with more choices rather than giving ALL the description on one page.

Like after you chopped off all the teacher's fingers with a dull rusty knife you had the choice to either scoop out her eyeballs with a fondue fork and skull fuck her to death or get a hot curling iron and penetrate her with it.

It's choices like this that can make all the difference.

There were also a lot of long stretches of blank spaces between text for some reason.

But I'm sure your next story will be better being a demon king tyrant and all.

This is fucked up.

sick. evil

Ah, this was certainly something. :P

What the hell! This is insane!

This game was seriously disturbing; in fact, it was one of the most disturbing games on the site... But still, good torture methods :3

11/10

Quite disturbing. The four year old and the character should have fought to the death lol.

yea it was ...... ugh I wish I could've controlled the torture the killing of the little girl was unreasonable but great

Well, I read through the comments... Apparently this was about bunnies.