Final Destination: Cheating Death

The stroyline is very disjointed and the option which led the reader to win before the actual story even started confused me. I feel like the story was too fast-paced and the author should have fleshed out the story with more detail, but with a little more effort, the author could turn this story into a great Goosebumps-like adventure.

There were numerous grammatical errors. At least one every sentence, because you didn't space after a comma or period (which is vital!!) Also, there were quite a few spelling errors and you forgot to start a new paragraph in dialogue. Basic grammar, people! The story was decent, but there was still too much to read, and combo'd with bad grammar and a strange stroyline, it made me just skip through most of the game ot get to an End Game link.

A decent take on a crappy movie. The opening scene was nicely worded. The other comment about the he/she thing is true. Try using paragraphs for the dialogue so it's easier to read. The deaths could be more creative; most of them involve things falling on heads and getting tackled out of the way.

I probably enjoyed this a lot more than the average reader. Possibly due to the fact that I actually like the movies and funny death scenes. Perhaps there's something wrong with me, but that's not what this comment should be about. Let's talk about the game:

The admittedly horrible punctuation and grammatical errors didn't really bother me as much, I didn't even notice them. I also found the death scenes funny. My friend's brains going all over me is really something.

A bit of non-deadly humor was also present and reminded me of the way I write my games. "You almost puke", then a few sentences later "that's when you DO puke". Gets a point up for that.

Gets a point DOWN for the stupid he/she stuff. I'm generally against that shit, but if you're going to implement it, at least do it properly, and not the way you did which is quite possibly the worst possible option.

Finally, I liked the fact there were different endings, so branching is present, and the choices MOSTLY make sense, but one that annoyed me was the "go left/right" one. Unless I missed something, that's purely a 50/50 choice. Not exactly what I like to see in games.

Overall, this is probably way too high for what it is, but I give this game a 5/8. Not that the creator cares, seeing as he hasn't logged on in like 3 years.

Please add more scenarios????????

It was so intense... Really fun and I got a good ending after a few tries.

Short and kinda meh. The lack of spaces after periods annoyed me.

4/10

This was awesome, I saved everyone

Great game! I only played once though. I might even ay again!

Obviously not the best-written story, but it was really funny and actually fun to play through.

5/8.