Final Destination: Cheating Death

The stroyline is very disjointed and the option which led the reader to win before the actual story even started confused me. I feel like the story was too fast-paced and the author should have fleshed out the story with more detail, but with a little more effort, the author could turn this story into a great Goosebumps-like adventure.

There were numerous grammatical errors. At least one every sentence, because you didn't space after a comma or period (which is vital!!) Also, there were quite a few spelling errors and you forgot to start a new paragraph in dialogue. Basic grammar, people! The story was decent, but there was still too much to read, and combo'd with bad grammar and a strange stroyline, it made me just skip through most of the game ot get to an End Game link.

A decent take on a crappy movie. The opening scene was nicely worded. The other comment about the he/she thing is true. Try using paragraphs for the dialogue so it's easier to read. The deaths could be more creative; most of them involve things falling on heads and getting tackled out of the way.

This was awesome, I saved everyone

Great game! I only played once though. I might even ay again!

Obviously not the best-written story, but it was really funny and actually fun to play through.

5/8.

It was fun! It definitely was intense but I like that in choose your own story games

This is so interesting! I’ve always had a thing for Final Destination, so this game really seems like a good thing for fans of the franchise. There could be better stuff though, but it’s fun either way.

good game

this was the best game to play i wonder if i could ever cheat death