Player Comments on Mario's Adventure Island

That was dumb. I like Mario, but this game ruins it. 2/8 because it’s not the shittiest game out there.

Mama Mia! This-a game didn't even give Mario an Italiano accent! It's-a stupido!

good but can i meet peach

Short and sweet. There’s a certain charm and humor to this game. I like it.

This is garbage, and absolutely embarassing. Baffling that it has stayed up for as long as it has.

I don't think there was even one sentence in this that didn't have some sort of fundamental error of spelling, syntax, capitalization, or style.

So that in itself is actually sort of impressive.

1/8. Yeesh.

that was fun...

Yeesh. 1/8.

Not what i expected but good keep it up

Can't really judge much because of how short it is. But the "Can you even read? Which one of the two options sounded less stupid?" (or something like that) was funny.

The grammar wasn't good. The story has potential though.

This was bad for so many reasons...

First of all, the grammar was very bad, there were obvious mistakes in nearly all of the pages of the game.

Second of all, the general story, or lack thereof. I know that the original games don't offer you much of a story beyond simply to go rescue the princess from the evil Bowser, but you could have at least offered us SOME backstory as to why the two plumbers are rescuing Peach.

Third of all, and a bit of a personal problem here. If the player of the game makes a mistake, you don't call him out on his stupidity and allow him to go back, you simply write out a proper end scene for the player, which brings me to another problem... do we have infinite lives? Because I just tested it a couple times and it seemed that I did have infinite lives allowing me to restart the game all over again.

I'd say more, but I feel like the pitfalls of the game will be obvious to anyone who plays the actual game. I rate it a 2/8.

I love this story and Mario, but the grammar is a little off.

Okay...

it was short and sweet

Very short. It's OK, I guess, but it could use a little more work.

Love Mario, and love this. Well crafted, short when you figure out how to get the ending( that's not bad ) and just a whole lot of fun!

great

errors, short.

This was both enjoyable and cute! So I adored playing this, excellent job.

I actually found this really cute ^-^
Maybe it was the pictures
Or maybe the writing.

This is a great adventure book

it was okay

The backstory is cheesy...

Cool

Linear, but at least you had a go. 3/8

At least this story seems happy about itself.

It really made me think about my next move, but sometimes involved a bit of trial and error.

So boringgggggggggg *falls asleep*

Gvvr

eh.....
random great rating! 8/8

Meh, I could use work. otherwise OK.

Woo. we're forced to use extra life for an ending. Well unfortunately i did not like how i was told 'stupid'. This site named ChooseYourStory for a reason, you know. 2/8.

okay

This was just disgusting. Completely linear, some branches you just wheeled right back around and made me choose the other one. Completely boring, same old save Peach and stop Bowser. Bad grammar and spelling, every sentence was horribly thought out. Bad detail, absolutely nothing had any sort of context or detail. Gosh, I have so much to write but so little motivation. Your method of writing switched every two or so pages, from script to common text. Make up your mind! Scripting was a horrible idea, though, so I don't recommend it. You need to unpublished this atrocity! I don't even believe it can be fixed. You really need to improve on your writing skills if this is all you can come up with. 1/8.

Okay ! This is a good one !

3 words. Linear And Boring

This is incredibly linear. The grammar is also quite bad.

cool game

It was 'okay'. The description sounded a lot better than the game itself, and there was too much jumping around. I did like the "Extra Life" idea to replace the "Go Back" buttons.

Meh it's ok

Not challenging or original or even all that interesting. *sigh*

awsome

I think it was too easy, but it could be improved by making deaths a little less random and maybe you could make the game a little longer. I finished it in like, literally a minute and 30 seconds.

Nice game!

... This is a particularly angry Mario >.>

Awesome Does Not Approve!
Really linear, and horribly short. I also falt like it had a lack of action and adventure, and all you had to do was:
1. Fight Bowser. If you die, you keep getting random 1-ups.
2. Save Peach, which really wasn't a task at all, considering we didn't need to do anything, the game did it for us. 2/8. Nice pictures.

ok I guess

I would have liked an ending where I can actually die, but other than that it was a good game.

a little fun I quess...

That's A Great Mario Game!

pretty good.

awesome

Short, but it was fun. The pictures were good too.

Um, even though it was called Mario's Adventure, I realized this time, that Luigi does more in the end,lol! The plot needed some sizing up, it's impossible to follow. S*** just kind of comes out of nowhere.

The story was rather generic and awfully short. I loved the pictures you chose to go along with the story. Make sure you describe what is going on in fuller detail- people like to be immersed in the story and that helps. Keep up the good work!

Eh...erm...ummm. Pretty weak plot there. I...*cough*

umm...

It was a very good game. Keep it up. However, I found a few spelling mistakes, but that's OK.

I liked the pictures, but otherwise... see all the other comments.

Far too generic. The writing is bad, as well as the gameplay. Needs serious work.

Fantastic

Man... how linear can you get? THERE IS NO POSSIBLE WAY TO LOSE! yeah, mr. infinite extra lives. unoriginal, no detail, crappy descisions, but good pictures. 2/8

You're lucky I'm rating this 3/8. The events were too far apart, the game was linear... the only reason I did'nt give you a one was because of the great pictures.

it sucked [darthvader,s little brother]

Being a casual Mario fan myself, I found this a bit disappointing. The second and third ones are probably longer and more detailed, though, so I may try them.

A very easy game that a 7 year old could figure out. I'm sorry if this offends anyone. I'm just saying what I truly feel about the game.

Pretty short and unoriginal. I just jumped on a turtle and blasted bowser - a couple links and I was finished.

It was alright, make another one and use a really cool original idea.

It was okay. Needs a few grammatical adjustments though.

Hmmm, some game. Nice pictures.

EASY EASY EASY.
limit the extra-lives next time

It's not too hard,fun,but TOO EASY.

Fun game, though a little linear and pretty short. It was still a pretty fun game!

there was very little choice. but it was a decent story.

Okay for a game about Mario, I guess...

This was really fun... and funny!

It was fun... But dangit, it was TOO short!

Hey this is good. There are multi-paths to go, I didn't know so now I see where bowser cusses. Weird, I don't think he would do that, nor does he have the voice to.

Fun game, and I suggest it. I hate reviews though. Bye.

Played it agained, just because it was that good...well, not the best, but still pretty cool. 5/8. I never saw bowser curse in anyway, I must be blind.

The other 2 are good, but this one is kinda meh

This is a very funny game and has many references to other Mario games - i.e. when Mario spins Bowser around, which is from Mario 64, I think. Anyways, a brilliant game - definitely worth a look!

Lovely Game Now Im Going To Play No 2!

it was ok but good job!!!!!!!

I rated this down a bit to help the site.

Hey, that was a great game! I really liked the sprites that you put in. I'm a big fan of Mario personally, so I had to try this game. No Offense, but I think if you're not a Mario fan I wouldn't recommend it. ABSOLUTELY FREAKIN' AWWWEEESOOOOME!!! for mario fans. E-mail me back plz.

Not bad, especially considering I don't like Mario Games!

THIS WAS AWSOME

really easy and childesh

Cool

That was sorta fun

kinda easy...

Thank God for extra lives!!!

Ok, I LOVED IT! I think it could have been a little longer though. Just a little. Oh, and no offense, but I HATE THE IDEA OF BOWSER CURSING!!!!! Seriously. I mean, what if like a nine-year old played this??? They would see all those asteriks and dollar signs and either they would know Bowser was cursing or they would think it was pretty. And I know that you're free to write whatever you want, but still. Come on. Anyway, good game, gonna play the sequels, and I give it an eight out of ten.

Wow. Would've been good if I liked Mario

Oooh I wish I still had my old school nintendo!

That was fun. the animations were great. Mabey you could get a picture of the place they're at.

The sotries could have been longer and it would be nice to have more options.

Lol...

It was so Awsom Pleas make another one but next time make it more chalenging.

P.S
MAIRO RULESS!!!!!!

fun and short, but that is a good thing becuase i haved to mowe the lawn.

This game was easy but it was fun to and I hope to have others do it. The bowser battle was really fun and it had pictures to show what you did that was cool.

That was a cool game

Hey! graet game you made a great game great job!

I really love mario

Funney game and oh yea BLAH

Way too short and way way too easy.

I like anything with Mario in it.<br>

yay i win!!!!!!!! umm i would probly have to say that this was the stupidest thing ever, it would kind of help if you actually made more than one choice.

Jasmine: &#34;Great game! I really loved it!&#34;<br>Kim:&#34;It was just like the gameboy game! It was fun!&#34;

Um, sorry, but that was lame.

I like the use of sprites but the game was blah!

one word, easy!!

a little short. but fun nonetheless

oh man, i was so sweet at this game.

STILL A CLASSIC AT THIS SITE!

KIK ASS! GOOOO LUIGI!

Devin just go to my games make an account and the rest is self explainatory later dude<br><br>oh and devin check out my game Shadow X

That was awsome keep it up that was the mast challenging game ever <br><br> P.S. everyone check out my new game Shadow X

Its OK! Good Work.

This is the best choose your own adventure of all time. I like Mario more than any other series and I'll never stop liking it!

Wow....realistic, but not enough choices. Great game :)

Its a nice game. MARIO RULES!!!!!!!!!

I Love Mario This Game Is Cool

Your game was too short.

Weird. Just like Super Mario Bros. Where did u get those pictures?

that was a cool game. i managed 2 complete it :). 1 thing though. if u do another 1 then make it a bit more longer lol.

Kinda short, but wahoo! LUVED IT!

That was a fun game. (I love nintendo)

I like it

Cute game

It's kind of cool, but make it like the games a bit more, and have mazes, and puzzles.

great pics but the game was no better than the crono sword...if thats what it takes to be featured tp 5 look out!

if this is one of the best war games...with no guns...guess work....no...

Nice Game! Your site is cool too!

? This is the game ppl have been raving about???

this game was fun. but i think you should make an advanced mario game! like trying to find mushrooms and stuff...

Good game. Well set. Nice fighting.

pleas tell me how to make a game

Very Fun

Very Fun

this was a nice game but the seconds ones better because it was more challenging for me

KOOL! Awesome, too short though. Make a longer one, a #3, i played 2, good job man...

Cool game... loved the pictures, awsome game hope you make anotherone<br>

You're game is good as! Can you please E-mail me how to get moving Mario pictures? Thankyou! My game is ISLAND QUEST:Coming soon! From Finn the yoshi freak.

yo! awesome game...make another one! i love maro stuff

love it, lil too short

Great game.<br>I love Mario and Luigi. Where'd you get the pictures?

GREAT GAME!! well thought out and fun! Try this one!

great game! LA little too short though, make it longer, i love it!

Great Game, i love to see a classic character in a home made game! Nice pictures! Youve defenetly got a skill for this Game Making stuff...