Not so Quiet on the Western Front

Player Rating3.85/8

"#496 overall, #21 for 2005"
based on 185 ratings since 07/13/2005
played 2,393 times (finished 223)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Fairly serious game (be able to handle war and blood and gore, Actual pictures of the dead and injured). -Not So Quiet on the Western Front is a story based on the Western Front in World War 1. Able to Choose your nationality, and lots of other options...

P.S. Actual pictures of ww1 battles and casualties

Player Comments

Wow. What a dissapointment.

The ending was not justifiable at all. It was way to quick, and way too rushed.

Like I said on a different storygame, it is never okay if someone is able to write out your entire plot in points.

-Pick England or Germany/Prussia (I picked England although I doubt it really matters)
-Go to the church
-Go to the bar
-Go on the front lines
-Hold your position, The End

The initial idea of this story is great. You play as a boy who wants to fight in World War I. It sounded fun. However, it was way too short, and like Madbrad2000 said below me, it actually did leave you staring at your screen. I was so surprised at how quick it was.

The writing was also another thing that ruined it. The writing had a lot of punctuational errors, like, for example, forgetting to put the quotation mark in the right place. Also, the detail was not here. It needed to be detailed so as to leave an image in the reader's head. But instead it is pretty blunt and badly written, using no adjectives or anything really to describe a specific scene. To me, it seems like the author wrote the story, and without proofreading it or even bothering to re-read it, uploaded it. There were many more ways to improve this work.

I personally think this should be taken off, 2/8.

P.S. The images don't work.
-- Fazz on 8/5/2014 3:42:21 AM with a score of 0
This was pretty dull. You are presented with no real choices that make a difference. The story is too short to have anything of substance, needs more length, more characters, some semblance of emotion/depth, give me a reason to actually be fighting so I feel like we are working towards something good! more description please
-- lilyluna on 7/8/2019 12:21:41 AM with a score of 0
It was a very good story i would recomend it
-- Tanner Harn on 12/4/2018 11:17:01 AM with a score of 0
This was too short
-- Naruto031 on 4/14/2018 12:00:42 AM with a score of 0
too short without much of a plot nor a good ending... well it's too short to develop any sort of plot I guess.
-- KatsuDrako on 10/23/2017 12:07:50 PM with a score of 0
Too short
-- Sinister6 on 10/2/2017 8:00:03 AM with a score of 0
It was a bit short but overall it was pretty good.
-- grimmreapergamer on 7/3/2017 5:15:22 PM with a score of 0
Endings really abrupt.
-- crazygurl on 6/12/2017 11:11:59 PM with a score of 0
What kind of ending is that?
-- VicMars14 on 1/27/2017 7:38:10 PM with a score of 0
Cool story, you should make it longer
-- Voltage on 11/27/2016 11:54:52 PM with a score of 0
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