Player Comments on Prometheus Academy

pretty good killed the hero that got the folks

This was AMAZING. I cannot express any more how delightful of a read this was. My one complaint was that it is rather hard to get to the actual story bit, as i had to go thru multiple paths to get an ending that wasn't "Sheep".

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I’ll leave my comment short and prompt.

That was amazing. The writing was immersive and had just the right amount of lore and choices. The storyline was easy to follow yet effort had to be used in order to make choices that wouldn’t result in death. The characters were well fleshed out and the idea itself was refreshing.

Really, one of the best books I’ve read here and definitely worth a read.

I enjoyed this its old and there are a couple of spelling mistakes took me awhile to finish it ill recommend this to any one

local man gets shamed for feet fetish 10/10

I like the overall concept of the game but the set up was a little weird but overall good game awesome job!

wow i was badass

It had emotion and hardships, in most stories they will seem like they forget the bad things in the world. This story has dead families, foster homes, and well being kidnapped, but she liked it in the end! I think this is a story to be inspired by and will be remembered by me when I think nothing could get worse and things will never change, but they will!

NO NO NO I DON'T WANT TO BE CALLED EYEPATCH! ALSO, GET ME OUTTA THIS DANG HOSPITAL!

Excellent story! I've gone through pretty much all the story options — including some of the more lemony ones which I skipped over. Either way, the writing is exemplary, with very few grammatical errors (that I could see). A Sequel to this would be highly enjoyable.

It took me awhile, but when I finally got to an ending that wasn’t dying or getting my memory wiped(ending: man) it was totally worth it! Beautifully written story of blind revenge.

Ughhhhhhhhhhh I can’t get past the first “test”

i loved it!!! Please write a part two! I want to hear more about Mia after graduation, with her crew living the high life! Or her love story with Luc!

What an amazing story! I admire the love and effort placed into the story! it was captivating, action packed, romance, suspense, my stomach turned with anticipation of my choices. Very well done!

At first, I tought what the hell.. Do short. But then I figured out I kept making the wrong choice. After that I Made the right ones and I absolutly loved it! Very well written and made me think of another choice driven story I loved, namely hero project. The humor in this story was great and made me laugh out loud, mix that with a captivating storyline and I'm hooked!

That was awesome, I love all of your stories that I've played so far.

Good

Just got another happy ending! Love it!

So good! Is it weird that I like Doctor Griffith?

ended in only 4 choices, thanx (!)

I'm a motherfucking bear bitches

Certainly one of the better reads on this side.The flow was interesting and engaging.A little disappointed with the Man ending as (no good choice in a choice based game).Overall,It's a great read I must say so.This one also enthrals you enough to seek out the other endings.

7/8.Long,Interesting,Engaging.


Stalke Welsh Strikes Again.

OOOOOHHHHH THIS IS GOOODDDI HOPE IT GOT MORE< LIKE A SERIES OR SUMTHIN!

HA! I killed Micheal in the end. That was my favorite ending. (Micheal is a drunken prick who can die in the deepest, darkest, and most fiery places in Hell.) I loved the story and saw why it won the contest. I only noticed a few spelling errors. EX:
Mona is already tucked in [her] bed, [his] red, ruddy face looking up at you from under the covers.
or when you said, tot he, instead of, to the, this made me smile. Overall it was a great story and I enjoyed it a lot.

I fucking loved it

Awesome! That's all I can say.

The grammar was patchy and the errors present sometimes were a little distracting, but the story was fantastic and quite enjoyable.

no thanks

One of the best stories I have ever read! I went back and got every ending and choice and I still want more!

I got the wolf ending. The game was a bit shorter than I expected but I'm not sure if that's just my fault. Overall the game had well-developed characters, a good plot, and few grammar mistakes. I give it solid seven, which is crazy since NOTHING is better than Reeses.

This is a amazingbook, and it's very creative. My only problem with it is that it's a but annoying to have to restart from the beginning every time you die. Maybe there could be some kind of checkpoint or something?

A great Light story, you could spend a couple of hours reading looking over all the choices and by the end feel good about yourself, Good Job

Wow, I was really impressed by this story. The immersion was fantastic, the plot was enthralling, and the grammar and spelling were pretty spot-on. I always love getting to play as a female protagonist in an action game (seeing as I'm a female) and I adored Mia's character. All in all, one of the best chose your own adventure games I've ever played.

Very good. Aged it like 5 times. But to much cussing

What were you thinking???!!!! I am a child and it is to bloody!

Brilliant

I loved the game. It took awhile to play and had a lot of different choices.

Really great with really descriptive outcomes for each choice! Highly recommended!

Fantastic game with a rivoting story.

Too little choices during game, but interesting endings compensate.

better than reeses cups, not better than reeses ice cream

i liked it i thought the crimson cape was like super man nope he just can fly it seems but i really like this story

Good, but I have two complaints. One, there are not many choices; it’s more like a story than a choose your own adventure. Two, there were some grammar/spelling mistakes. Otherwise, it was really good! ;)

Does'nt getting stabbed in the neck kill you, though?

i loved the story but i wanted to kill more people with bombs or guns

This was a great story over all, good writing and grammar. Interesting characters, and interesting story.

But the ending was definitely rushed, starting with meeting Maximov. It seemed like that was just to set the characters up with a too good to be true ending where they just get everything they could ever need without doing much for it. Also I was surprised to see the epilogue right after that, I thought there was going to be more story.
While it is amusing that they just jump the Crimson Cape and fuck him up it would have been better if you set it up detailing how they found him, and maybe giving the reader some choice on taking him down.

Other than that it was a great story though. I hope you keep writing more stories.

Good game really enjoyed it, but please make a squeal it feels kinda unfinished.

great story

Awesome story

Action Packed and has the perfect balance of writing and decision making.

That was such an awesome story, I hope there will be more like this one.

Really good lots of content. Just want more available endings. Otherwise, it's amazing!

this is one of the few games i'm giving a full 8. the writing, the atmosphere, its all superb. Jesus blew himself up (i'm sure he can resurrect, he is the son of god after all) and I got to meet a tentacle monster. sounds like the beginning of a bad anime. anyway, great job. I would like to see more characters and maybe a choice of player gender. an excellent read from beginning to end

I was really upset when I didn't win the first time but then I tried again

I enjoyed it quite a bit, but I do wish it was longer, it was still pretty good.

... Fabulous. Steve is a brilliant writer!

wish it was longer

UHG it's short and there's no overall storyline SNOOZEFEST

R.I.P Jesus. This was a fantastic book. It had your mix of romance, action, blood etc. There were many swear words, and I think that you could have cut down on that but anyway it was AWESOME! I gave this the highest ranking.

I loved this so much!!

8/8
Where to start? This story is one of the best I have ever read through. Normally , even if I liked a story I wouldn't comment but people need to know how amazing this one is.

I was hooked from beginning to end , lingering on every-word. Your literacy skills are above average. At one point I got confused why there was no choices (towards the end) , only the path you wanted us to go on but even that fitted with the plot on the ending I got.

Very well put together.




Perfect score

It's a great story perfect for anyone well not really keep away from small children.

Great story

Nice story.

This was very good to be honest, the only complaint I have is the lack of meaningful choices other than that all was dandy.

Damn I lost, just like Dark Souls. Good adventure though.

Very great read. I got caught up with attaining power I became someone's pet. I can't wait to go through again and get a different ending. Great work, definitely worth playing!

I loved this game, it had lots of choice and tons of options. Some choices were also unorthodox and choices that moved along the story were not always the obvious ones. The plot was good too, and the character description was very nice. You could really get the feel of how much of a badass Mia was

Wow I survived the academy and became a monster .

I really liked the bear endings

Oh my god I got the snake ending????
Awesome game!! PLEASE make a sequel

well is just freeze my brain

PLEASE make a part 2, this was so cool, but it is too short...

Nice game man! 6/8

Very good. The only flaws were some font changes and a couple misspellings. But otherwise it was great. (I ended up dissecting Crimson Cape.)

Maybe I didn't give this game enough credit in my first review. Ever since I played this, it's been growing on me and sticking in my head.

Prometheus Academy is a story about superpowers. Specifically, a superpower school. But what could've been another, generic, Sky High clone instead turned out to be one of the best games on this site. You see, Prometheus Academy isn't a school for heroes... it's a school for villains.

You play as Mia, a young girl who had her family massacred by an explosion. An explosion that could've been prevented if the Crimson Cape, the flying brick archetype of the story, would've been the tiniest bit more careful.

After being recruited into Prometheus Academy, you get a badass cyborg arm and eye to replace the ones you lost. At this point, the game takes on a rather 'unique' school dynamic. Every student is cussing, swearing, and beating the shit out of each other in some way or another.

The game becomes very much linear at this point, which was an understandable disappointment. The story transitions into picking groups of classes, picking the choices that obviously correspond with what you would've learned in those classes, and enjoying an ending.

That's where Steve's writing shines the most, though. Each ending is thrilling in its own right. Mia doesn't feel empty or jump for joy after killing the Crimson Cape, she just feels... satisfied. Just satisfied. That's when you realize she either let go of her family a long time ago, or didn't ever love them in the first place.

Either way, Mia just wanted to get away with killing the city's greatest hero. And that, is fucking awesome.

Bravo

i really liked.. what i don't liked?
its short...
but i liked anyway ^^ :) :D
now, time to search for more storys.. ^^

That was very fun and long, I felt that there wasn't a lot of choices though, but the story was fun I got to the ????end???? hope the next story is just great if not greater that is. :D

AWESOME

Very nice, love the story, kind of abrupt, as I thought there would be more of a fight with the Crimson Cape, but nice.

Very nice game, well written if you can ignore some typos. The rhythm is good and it's an enjoyable ride.

No words...no words...

8\8
Snake

I went with the group route and accidentally created Suicide Squad. Terrific story

It was pretty cool. Despite the constant cussing, I liked it. I ended up being a swordswoman and killing Crismon Cape. Woo-hoo!

It was pretty cool. Despite the constant cussing, I liked it. I ended up being a swordswoman and killing Crismon Cape. Woo-hoo!

Very good game, though my path as a gunslinging gangster was pretty shortlived :(. Beside that i loved how you had a lot of choices and was not forced into any BIG situations you did not like. So at the end my character was really represenitive of what i like and even though that particular storyline was short, it was still satisfying.

Good game, but how was Mia able to kill the Crimson Cape with two revolvers? You made it clear several times that Michael had super strength in addition to his flight ability, and he can't be strong enough to ram into a van if he's not durable enough to be shot by a bullet.

overall good game, although this little fact really annoyed me!

-Charaxes

I loved it

God dayum! That was great! Your stories just keep getting better and better! Keep the ideas flowing!

woah. That was... amazing.
Really Good storyline with lots of choices. I loved playing it.

The story was great. I like how each character had their own unique personality that is easily identifiable between them. The plot was quite interesting and I enjoyed the environment that was around. The writing was alright except for a few typos here and there but nothing to devastating. However, I did feel there was a lack of variety in the choices you could make. It felt very linear to me in that there was only one choice that would make you win the game. In addition, I felt the ending was kind of anti-climactic, brushed over and rushed. Don't get me wrong, the ending was fitting for your character and satisfying (don't want to give away spoilers) but it just was very disappointing considering everything that had led up to it. Overall, I enjoyed the story and had a great time going through it. It kept my attention and I was engaged until the very end. I give this game a 6/8. Pretty solid!

It could have stood to have more variety for choices. In most cases it was "make the right decisions or lose".

However that's my only complaint. The characters were likeable, the plot was enjoyable, and the ending was satisfying. You also didn't try to bite off more than you could chew. Well done.

It's very good but with a bit more variety it could be great. I feel like if the story went more in depth on her backstory and her parents and that Crimson Cape guy etc etc, this story could really improve. A few typing errors not much variety for choices, in the way that in the end I think you either be a mobster or not, though I'm unsure. But the writing was pretty good and the humour was there so I'll give it a 6/8.

great story a few typos but there not so frequent or horrible that effects the story all that much

This is an amazing storygame. It is probably one of the few that I will reread. Great job.

Awesome!!

This was a great story with plenty of humor and distinct characters. The dialogue was spot-on; the description just enough. Well done.

Great game. Got the sheep ending. Will go back for more, since there's obviously more to the game.

Ha ha, I got the Bear Ending as well. This is a great game. It'll make this category significantly less bland.

Heh, wouldn't hurt you to do some typo editing, but the story was fun. Nicely done, Steve.

Bear Ending.

Steve, this is the worst story on the site and you should definitely, definitely withdraw it from the contest.

Maybe replace it with something about talking cats instead. You still have about 40 hours. I believe in you.

That took me less than three minutes. It was cool though.

Most likely going to be one of my favorites.

For a sci-fi story, I'd give this a 7/8. As it stands, I gave it a 7/8.

However, there was a certain spark missing to the story. It didn't feel very... school-like. It felt like a fuckfest of monstrosity which was, obviously, conveyed very well.

My problem is with Mia, mainly. She doesn't make any friends, even if they're referred to as such. She doesn't shine with particular motivation, and always came across as kind of dopey and out of it.

Still a great story though.