Running Program...

Most of the riddles were very simple and didn't require much thought. Especially the question that asked you the first letter of the alphabet. Tricks like that work with verbal communication, but is hard to use in text form where people are more likely to be reading more carefully and slowly. The final question took me a lot longer to get than I'd like to admit, so good job on that one.

Grammar was under mediocre, most notably during the story about the little girl and her horse. I understand that it's only there to distract the reader, but the only thing distracting about it is how difficult it is to read.

Overall, I liked the running program theme, but the questions were too simple. Grammar is, of course, always fixable. It would be a lot better if it was longer and the questions progressively got harder. The general idea of the quiz was solid, but lacking in a few areas. 4/8

it was ok I guess...

Can't quite tell whether the puzzles were really clever or really stupid since there were a few I didn't understand at all, and I'm not 100% sure whether they didn't make sense because you're just too smart for me, or if they just didn't make sense in general.

Still, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt because the puzzles that I did understand were clever enough. ^_^

The premise was cute. The writing itself was also decent; I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and the intro was written in an interesting / suspenseful way.

I get that part of the suspense was that you 'die' if you get any question wrong, but I found having to click 'go back' if you mess up to be frustrating. The riddles themselves were okay. Most of them made logical sense, although there were a few trick questions inserted in.

Overall, it was a decent (if short) little game.

It’s pretty good ,but it is really short

This was just dumb. Some questions had the ‘correct’ answer actually be wrong, other questions were guesses, and the last question? I thought you might have to click the sixth ‘the sixth’ link, but no.

2 for effort.

This was hard to follow because some of the logic is subjective. I lost on the first question because I was thinking "when you buy one apple and one lemon, you only have one. But you buy one BUNCH of bananas. Therefore, he could make more profit from one purchase." How was I supposed to know he was going to make it into lemonade? Most of the questions are like that. Some are easy, some are just confusing and poorly strung together. I don't mean to be rude or unkind. But if you're making a riddle, you have to write it in view of how someone else would reach the conclusion you already know. If you write it so that you, who knows the answer, will be able to get it, then it won't work. In other words, give the person all of the information they need to solve the riddle in the riddle itself, but make it as inconspicuous as possible so they have to think about it.

Okay... The questions got increasingly more confusing... 4/8.

Quite good, last question could use an explanation tho.

The first question. The first... I thought I was smarter :)