Zombie Flesh Riot

Player Rating3.35/8

"#696 overall, #39 for 2001"
based on 179 ratings since 12/14/2004
played 4,552 times (finished 183)

Story Difficulty7/8

"wade in shark infested water"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
MMMmmm. It's not entirely finished, and I'm not sure what maturity rating it should have given the amount of foul language, reference to deviant sexual acts, and utterly unfair bile directed at eighteen year old men. IF THIS VERSION IS PUBLISHED, PLEASE DON'T CLICK ON ANY LINKS TO GREEN GLOWING GOVERNMENT BUILDINGS; THAT IS A PLOT ARC I HAVEN'T GOT ROUND TO YET.

It's a bit ropey, but I hope the frequent violence more than makes up for the plot. Well, this strategy has worked for Hollywood for the past 50 years. Anyways, please post criticism/flame mail so that I can re-write/remove the offending article.

Player Comments

CHOOSE YOUR OWN DEAD LINK...

READ THE RULES.No dead links.
-- poison_mara on 12/2/2019 4:04:42 PM with a score of 0
I hate unfinished games...

And that's exactly what I'm seeing over here. So many pages with no links. Absolute no-no. The only redeeming quality was that your storytelling managed to keep me awake and a bit entertained.

When you see this, take my advice to unpublish and reedit this into something that uses your potential, because in its current form, it's just choosing your own boredom.

3/8.
-- AgentX on 3/4/2017 6:35:03 PM with a score of 0
The plot and characters felt very stale. The end goal was generic and the means of going about achieving them were uniform as well. What bothered me even more was the fact that when you met an end there were no End Game and Leave Comments screen. You need to have those in order to not completely frustrate the reader. I do applaud you for your vivid imagery when talking about the setting.
-- Zulutrader on 1/30/2017 11:17:58 AM with a score of 0
It's a no from me.
-- RimC on 9/16/2016 6:56:53 PM with a score of 0
it was alright.
-- Karateprincezzz on 4/20/2016 4:24:45 AM with a score of 0
This wasn't a really good story. You sound more like an angry person who wrote this to talk about how much he hates people from a certain economic class, in the form of a "zombie story." It would have been bearable if you actually finished the story instead of leaving it at the rush ending it had.
-- corgi213 on 10/18/2015 10:24:08 AM with a score of 0
Terrible, I wish I could rate it lower
-- AthenaT on 6/14/2015 4:11:04 PM with a score of 0
So, adding end game (and leave comments) links to pages other than the last page and making the game less linear would make the game a lot better. But good job on the spelling.
-- Dmanxbox on 5/11/2015 10:26:36 AM with a score of 0
Meh
-- Shadow_Strider on 4/4/2015 11:58:25 PM with a score of 0
Too hot to trot.
-- PortalSpartan on 2/13/2015 3:21:07 AM with a score of 0
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