Where do you make maps like that?
Well, I'm wondering how it would be possible to build such humongous empires. Size has been one of the biggest threat to the roman empire, which used too much of its force to keep itself coherent and made conquest more difficult, ultimately leading to the split and destruction of the empire.
I think that what allows us now to have such national unity, especially in the biggest countries, is the simplicity of communication and transportation, helping the nation to share its culture and way of life. I might be wrong though. Also, magic could solve one or two of these issues. Depends of the worldbuilding, tho
Tell Russell Crowe I am entertained. I like your writing style. The short, quick sentences reminds me of Geralt of Rivia’s voice from The Witcher. The last two paragraphs in particular are deeply engaging. The sentence structure fits the chaos and disorientation that is occurring in the story. Couple things:
- I think you meant ‘breath’ in the first paragraph. In the same place, I’m not sure if it should be “Each breath” or “Every breath”. I’m blanking on which is correct. Maybe either works?
- The man gives mercy to the young maid. He doesn’t take it.
I'm rooting for Lumina.
Don't let us down, now. I'm expecting a lot of good work coming from you guys this year.
Because you know I am a somewhat intelligent being.
Don't forget to post more updates as you progress.
Looking forward to it.
This looks really cool, I love the maps! It is obvious a lot of thought and effort has gone into this already and the plot looks interesting and unique. Good luck with it
Adele × Okami-kun is the OTP.
A little wincest never hurt, I suppose.
Why are you such a weeb?
Wibbons, more like WEEBINS am I right?
It literally means wolf