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Theeese, lyric are echoing off my brain,

dont any of your hater say these lyric are influence by mainstream,

i DON'T LIKE 2 CHAINS,

Scratch that make lil wayne,

I feel like i'm going insane,

My like is in a confusion,

liv'in illusion,

gotta defuse it but, the illuminatie is watchin my movements,

Every opponent i meet i smoke,

hey doe boy don't choke,

You see i'm quiet,

like a damn sleeping lion,

Im tryin to control my rage,

Can't take back what? you put on you facebook page,

but heeeey were entering another lyric age,

Just consider my a lyric sage,

And sorry but these comment are my only stage,

But just know rap live on,

in Eminem because he one of the lyrical rap gods,

I fast rap,

not a shame to say i want to follow in his foot tracks,

but I don't have the makings of a star,

because if i said the wrong it seem like i've gone to far,

So i'm going to end this with a hearty har har,

so plese applaud for the rapping? Ceasar.

Done

What you think? I made this after i listen to eminem rap god. I speed rap this.

I like speed-rapping this better, but that's just me...

http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/jimmybuffett/volcano.html

I wrote a pretty sweet rap when I was 12.

I got a toe

His name is Moe

And he's wearin a bow cause he's goin to the show

And it was red

But now he's dead

'Cause he was incinerated! Incinerated!

With a flame thrower with a flame thrower

Just like the cow

Oh  he was a glad cow

But now he's a sad cow

Cause he was a bad cow

By getting MAD COW!

Incinerated! Incinerated!

With a flame throwa with a flame throwa

(There's more, but I figured I wouldn't torture you all any further. I randomly came up with this while playing some dumb farming/burger restaurant game and that's what ya did to the poor cows XD)

EVERYONE MAKE RAPS!!!!

I don't . . .

But not good ones.

I did a few times back in high school but they mostly consisted of swear filled insults directed at various classmates. 

Well, now if we don't read them we'll die of anxiety. Thanks Endmaster....

I pity your classmates . . . I definitely don't want you tearing me apart (because you'll do it literary!)

Lol. Most of my old high school stuff isn't within my reach at this time, though it might be soon, so I if I actually dig something up I guess I could post it. Though given that none of you would know any of these people I'm not exactly sure how amusing it would be, unless you just like people getting insulted in general.

I didn't know JMGskills, but it was fun when you called him a fucktard!

It was funnier when Zikira said she wanted to punch him in the face. I think Aeon wanted to do worse though.

Given that picture of him as a hitman in the 16 Days In thread, he probably would've.

Y u pick on skills?

Endmaster just didn't like his personality. I didn't either, after reading the threads... his politeness was actually offensive somehow....

One of those people, huh? My girl (space -_-) friend told me I was too polite once . . .

Skill hasn't been online for a bit now... I wonder where he's gone? To spaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaace...

To go on a padawan's journey!

I had to... I'm sorry...

Hehehehahaha!!! That cracked me up. To where? Blackwood?

Yes! To destroy the Vegetarians!

They should be destroyed with pork swords!

HAHAHAHA! My god... The people on this site...

What JMG seemed to say:

Dear Vegetarians: My food literally shits on your food. And fuck you.

What JMG actually said:

I disapprove of this, and here's why... Now prepare to be rubbed the wrong way!

Soooo he was a polite asshole? I like polite people, easy to shit ster :D

I don't care for rap - but I thought that was pretty creative all the same, frank2  =)

It seems to be to be an idiotic indulgence in ego-stroking and angry bullshit. 

You have real potential as a rapper.

...Your comments always make my day. :(

Don't be offended, that's essentially what all rap revolves around: Praising yourself, talking about killing some people, and drugs.

Or some sappy yakking about how you grew up and trying end with some sort of positive heartfelt BS.

And bitches, don't forget the bitches

Can't get enough of them damn bitches, unless they're the kind that jump out from underneath porches and bite you...

Hey that that new school your talking about listen to Tupac ghetto gospel, dear mama and changes just to name a few .

Lol. "New school" rap is just bland and soulless for the most part. Even when they are talking about fucking bitches on top of a pile of cocaine they still manage to make it sound boring.

I'd rather hear Ice Cube going on a paranoid rant about shooting white people or even Eminem go on about raping his mom for the umpteenth time.

Try out Tech n9ne. while he does go on rants about his penis from time to time, I enjoy his work.

i love eminem

Uh, it had good rhymes?

Yeah, homeslice dat beat was the shit yo man jus throw the ass man fuck dat beat man it's sum good-ass shit in the shithouse man my face is like hell yeeeaaaaaaaaaaaah right now man you know what I'm sayin? You know what I'm sayin? was like some ghetto shit right there man was all like yeah and shit it was all cool and all that and shit man, shit! dat beats the shit right now man I can't even feel my feet no more its like the shit man you know what I'm sayin, man, you know it!

I was thinking of replying in ghetto but I can't be fucked.

Could you have been 1/2 fucked?

Well, I could translate it into Classic English, if you want.

Yes, fellow human, that musical piece was made out of my shit, do please throw your ass-man and fuck this musical piece, as, I assure you, it is quite good in the shithouse. This spectacular piece has inspired my face to contort in ways similar to a particular rage-comic face that does indeed state  "Hell yes" in a positive manner in which I am stating it now. Do you understand my English, sir? That was some very good shit, I do insist, it was rather cool. This music is such an inspiring piece that I am currently unable to recieve stimuli from my feet, and I repeat yet again, that it was indeed all very good. You do undstand my English, sir, yes you do!

That last part translated too well. I should have responded with worse grammar.

That was indeed an excellent translation my good man. I am envious of your talent.

How the fuck did I know you would write that? I'm psychic! 

Could you have been 3/4 fucked?

Perhaps 32/56 fucked?

Nice man