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The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

So I agreed to help @KiritoLeeWilliams with his upcoming storygame, which is going to be about a guy who gets his vengeance for the murder of his *cough I'm batman cough* parents. 

Note: This isn't my idea. I'm just proofreading and doing a path for him. 

The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

@KiritoLeeWillis ?

The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

Will it involve the protagonist dressing up like a bat and cleaning the streets of crime?

The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

No. Tbh, I'm not super impressed by the plot. I only agreed so it wouldn't suck so hard. 

The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

I actually checked it out for a second...

For Chrissake, make sure this guy doesn't fuck up!

The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

Yeah, this is probably going to be something I do most of the work on. XD

The Quest for Vengeance

10 years ago

I read more of it today. This'll be a nightmare for you to fix...