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I just learned about the Warrior cats getting deleted so while my game is being looked over I'm going to work on a new one. It's called Mall Mania and is all about Stanley Oddball Mall. I bet you can guess what this mall is going to be like based on the title. What is the weirdest things you can come up with that may lurk inside this mall that I could use in this story?

It can also add a character to my game if you want!

If my Warrior Cat game works out, I'll put this on hold. But it will be picked up at some point.

Thanks, Warriorstar

A dachshund that can shoot lasers out of its eyes and has wings.

I will be sure to add this 

(Finished it's part, but didn't end up using lazers, sorry)

Yeah lasers would make it too dangerous and it would probably kill everyone.

I'd like to suggest a good, old fashioned swamp monster.

Ok, now I just have to find where I can get a swamp 

Plant shop had a sprinkler system malfunction causing it to become overgrown and flooded, creating a small swamp.

A man who's completely mute, but if he's ever in extreme peril, he can open his mouth and an arm comes out that punches people right in the face.

XD this is definitely getting put in there

Okay! Thanks! 

(Note: Name it fluffy)

Hmm. Character named Billy Joe Bob who has the secret power of levetation. But he can only levetate people by the ears, and he is deaf. But when a person utters the word "train," a locomotive appears out of his ears and kills every person in a three-mile radius.

Also, when you call him Bill, the locomotive will appear and explode in a nuclear-weapon style. HE speaks with terrible grammar and you cannot say anything to him without the locomotive appearing. In short:

DO NOT SPEAK TO BILLY.

ooh, I like it XD

I'm going to merge this with Ford's idea, and he cannot speak, but the train thing %100

*locomotive explodes*

LOL

Wait did I say Ford...I meant the penguin dude up there sorry XD

The weirdest thing I can think of? Well, I doubt you want to dive to the depths of my mind. Even I avoid that place. It's scary.

So, why don't we find something much more mild, skimming across the surface? (There's no way, at all, whatsoever that this idea could possibly be related to the Tardis in Dotor Who....)

An object that is bigger on the inside than the outside. The surface area can change easily; becoming as small as a grain of sand, or as large as a mansion, yet the volume never changes. Everything on the inside is the exact same size, no matter what the exterior looks like. But, of course, this magnificent work of science often hangs out in the belly of a werewolf. :D Attached to a string, which is tied to a back tooth. Often used as a mode of transportation to get to a place only accessible by werewolf because of endurance/physical characteristics/lack of other technology to be able to get there/etc. And a fee of $15 to be able to take the trip.

...

What?

"mild, skimming across the surface" xD

Perhaps a minor exaggeration.

"An object that is bigger on the inside than the outside. The surface area can change easily; becoming as small as a grain of sand, or as large as a mansion, yet the volume never changes. Everything on the inside is the exact same size, no matter what the exterior looks like"  Not related to the TARDIS, huh? Are you sure about that?

You kids and your edits.

Dont write a random storygame. They all (with very few exceptions) suck.

Timescape! is an excellent game. I wish more games like it were on my site.

-alexp

I think Warriorstar means to make a storygame with weird and random things, not a "turn left and die, turn right and live with no real explanation" random storygame.

I repeat, random storygames suck.

Seriously though, my mind is a strange place. Anyway, I think it'd be funny to have a rhino in a pink dress and a tiara that calls everyone ignorant and says that they aren't fabulous enough to hang out with it. The player would then have to go on a scavenger hunt to receive a dress, a tiara, and some heels so that they could befriend the rhino and get an item that is required to advance the plot.

1.) Where did you get that GIF? 

2.) PewDiePie as a rhino?