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So, I recently decided that I would actually make a sequel to The Chris Parable because I don't have any creativity and can't think of anything original. However, for these reasons, I'm lazy and can't think of anything to implement into the story. I do want this to be more longer than than The Chris Parable (Hell, the first chapter will be as long as the original game) and I even plan to implement 20 endings (Including yet another SUPER SECRET BEST ENDING), but while my expectations and wants for this game are high, I'm worried that I won't go through with it because of a lack of ideas...

That's where all of you come in. What would you want to see in The Chris Parable 2? What should happen? Should I break the fourth wall a million times? How should Chris die in some of the endings? Like the game, the choice is your's. I'll use all suggestions (so long as they're not stupidly over the top) on this thread, so give me as many as you please.

Thanks in advance,
~Chris

Death by being trapped in an elevator, which is triggered when you don't do what the narrator says and continuously enter an elevator. Make said elevator play nothing but Justin Bieber songs instead of normal elevator music. 

And... Uh... Nope that's all I've got. 

Thank you for the ideas Ford and MidnightPhoenix, all your suggestions will be used (Also, because reasons, not all deaths will be actual endings [That means most of the deaths you suggested, Ford]).

Death by looking in a mirror and seeing a cow, and then having a heart attack at the sudden realization that the mooing you heard was actually you.

No fourth wall. At all.

Meet Albert Einstein and have this be an option.

Lead an army of giraffes.

@BradInDvorak
But... But The Stanley Parable broke the fourth wall!
@betaband
Your ideas, though very over the top, will be implemented somehow.

You can't break a fourth wall... if it never existed in the first place!

• Death by drowning in a pool of your own blood
• Death by drowning in a pool of your own vomit
• Death by drowning in a pool of your own frothing saliva
• Death by drowning in a pool

Death by drowning in a pool of drowned corpses.

Death by downing the contents of said pool.

Death by being used to drown someone is said pool.

Death by living

No.

Fine! Death by Strawberry pudding.

Done.

You do realize that if you make a "death by strawberry pudding," you're practically obligated to make a "death by spork(s)" right?

I thought you said I was your dad now.

:P Lazy brat, in my day, we put effort and creativity into our killings! Why, you could kill a man with a straw if you really tried!

Because I like juggling various stories at once, and because Hallo-fucking-ween is almost here, I decided to make a spooky scary comedy-horror that will pay homage to 80's slasher flicks and has the name Thriller (yes, I'll include a scene with dancing zombies). I'll be going with an Evil Dead setting (college kids are thrown into a cabin, summon demons, get killed in hilariously violent ways) but also throwing zombies, nightmare killers and chainsaw/machete wielding maniacs at our heroes, and maybe one of the characters will go full on Jack Torrance and try to kill everyone with an ax...

So, any suggestions for this? Deaths? Scene ideas? A better name? You decide!

Still strawberry pudding.

EDIT: P.S are you sure you can finish the game in time for Halloween?

No, this will be more serious than The Chris Parable 2.

Positive. I won't try to add a bunch of variables and shite or whatever. I'll try to get it up a day before Halloween or maybe on Halloween, but I promise it won't be published later than November 3rd. If it does take that long to finish, then I'll just let it collect dust until Halloween 2016. I don't have a specific deadline for TCP2 though.

Okay, well hope you the best of luck. 

Decided to just have a horror-comedy with only zombies so I can more easily work on it rather than trying to cram in a bunch of references and scenes that are just unrelated. I may keep the idea of a character going insane and trying to kill everyone, though. Anyway, because of this I'll be able to get this done before Obtober 31st and I might even publish it early.

I lost motivation and won't have the drive to do this in ten days. Sorry to disappoint like two people. I might be able to get this done for Halloween 2016, though.

I can't find this Chris Parable game. Where is it?

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-chris-parable

Spooky Deaths:

• Violent molestation by a giant spider.
• Literally explosive diarrhea after being force-fed Doritos Loco Tacos by Jeb Bush.
• Being shrunk to the size of an ant, then being shrunk again by a sentient ant and sat on by him.
• Attempting to reinforce the fourth wall, but failing and having it fall on you, crushing you to death.

Perhaps the violent molestation could involve a Doritos Locos Taco.

Seems legit.

rule 34 ftw

ALL of these deaths, whether track team related or not:

http://chooseyourstory.com/forums/writing-workshop/message/14530

I remember that thread XD Nah, I'd rather not have Chris get tortured and raped by the coach.

I COMMAND YOU TO RISE FROM YOUR GRAVE AND BE A THREAD AGAIN.

So yeah, still open to suggestions. Haven't added anything to the story in four months and I deleted Thriller, sorry for the two people still holding on hope for that.