Broken Wings

I really don’t know why I decided to read this instead of a more recent story, but this one really isn’t terrible.

SPOILERS

As some of the comments mention, it is a little weird to have a family friendly game that seems like it might be aimed toward children where all you can do is be a bird, flail hopelessly, and die. I definitely checked, and there isn’t any good ending or survival. This didn’t really bother me, and I suppose it didn’t say anywhere that this was supposed to be a children’s game, so what do I know?

It’s obviously very short, but I think these kinds of animal perspective games tend to be. I don’t think that I enjoyed reading it, but it definitely wasn’t bad. There is a level of writing competency that makes it easy to read, and the concept is interesting enough that I kept reading it, but really, after you experience one ending there’s no reason to keep reading it.

All in all, I definitely don’t regret reading it, and I think it’s short enough that nobody’s really going to hate it.

This is one of those games that makes me feel all sad ;-;

You did a really good job fleshing it out, and I could really feel for the bird, and feel sad and bad about what happens to it.

This storygame has an interesting plot, and although it was short, I liked the writing and the style of the author. I would read more from this author in the future.

That being said, I found this storygame to repeat itself a bit, which is a bit annoying and boring, but I guess it was still a good read overall.

Like some of the other comments say, it was inspiring. I really want to grow wings and injure one of them and then go on this adventure to see what it's like xD

3/8, good job but not the best.

I liked this game, it was sad and nice to see things realistically from a wounded animal's point of view. Within it's limits it was a good short-story game :)

it was good kkinda short tho

It’s kind of sad

fun and quick

its sad

Try it yourself! :3

wow... depressing! not a children's game!

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