Link's Escape

I liked the combination of the game in the story.

But, I must question a few things that appeared in your story: 1. Why this story feels more like 'Do you remember this?' quiz, than a story whom I control is Link (I guess?).

2. Did you proofread your story a couple of times before submitting it? (Grammar, writing, etc...)

3.Why did you make a story like a review to the game?
For instance: "I really like 'boss name' because..."

If I were the creator of this story; I would proofread, check and change the story to talking about the hero and his surroundings, like an actual adventure.
(Based on the game, of course)

My final rating to "Link's Escape" is: 2/8, needs to improve a lot...

This is more of a quiz than anything. The writing is not great and most of it just screams that it was written by someone very young.

First, the "story" is clearly unoriginal. That's not a good foundation to build off of. Progression is trial and error or knowledge of the game, and the puzzles are very simple. On top of that, there's really not much story to it. It's just solving puzzles and clicking links without any development.

The writing itself isn't great either. There are random paragraph breaks in places that don't make sense, sometimes even in the middle of a sentence. The spelling is often off as well as the grammar.

Overall, it's pretty bad and needs a lot of work. It's a pretty common trend for these 1/8 and 2/8 lengths to be half-assed, often unoriginal, partial stories. Honestly I'm unsure why I even bother. 1/8

lol, completes without playing or watching the game. But nevertheless, this is pretty good based on what I've heard on the actual game. You can expand and make this game longer though.

...... you need to up the maturity level because killing is no rated G!!

Great story! I’m not the best at Legend of Zelda, but I loved the story

This was so easy, even though I haven't played through the whole game! I have it on the 3DS, and I also have the gamebook. Since I like to read gamebooks, I know all the answers even though I'm still in the middle of the shadow temple. So this game was more like trivia then anything.

The names you 'made up' by changing the first letter don't even sound like names.

The pictures were a nice addition, though I don't know where you people find them and are able to use them. Thing is, they were my favorite part of the game. There was one ending, and it wasn't a realistic one. You can't defeat someone with one kick and one punch - especially not with you're hands tied on a chair!

The option to go left at the start leads to an overly short path compared to the other one; I wouldn't call that lucky.

Now the songs, I know some of them really well. I know the tune to some of them, because sometimes I just make Link play them so I can listen to them. So I was able to hum them to figure out what to push to get to the next page. I know them on the 3DS, though, so this was more challenging.

The game could use a little more work, but it shows how much you know about The Legend of Zelda.

Meh, it's not terrible, I guess. For some reason I got a good ending even without being familiar with the game...so idk.

very, very easy. i have the game.

Unfortunately the pictures were the most interesting part...

Too easy.