The Road to Glasgow.

This was pretty good! There are enough twists to keep the reader interested, while also having a good balance of humor and spooky elements to be a quite a enjoyable read. I also came across no issues with grammar, or at least ones that are readily apparent.

So, in closing, I feel as if this is a decent story.

Better than expected!

This game was entertaining to play. It wasn't exactly novel in any way, but it was humorous and kinda fun.

Overall, not bad.

Bravo!

This was great! I’m trying to write my own story, and it’s going so slowwwww, I can’t imagine how people can do this!!! I loved this story!

And yey made it to gasglow

Wow... I enjoyed this so much! Although I think you should add pictures on the items, it was really good. Keep it up!

Severely limits your choices.

Taking advantage of the advance editor helped out with making this have a more proper text adventure feel. Been a mem since 2007, but you have only wrote two story games, how unfortunate.

This was one of the best, most hilarious story games I've played! Amazing job! Keep writing!

I liked it it was a pretty good story