Jump For Joy
A
modern
storygame by
chocobot
Player Rating
2.92/8
"#817
overall
, #35 for
2001
"
Based on
137 ratings
since 12/14/2004
Played 1,811 times (finished 159)
Story Difficulty
1/8
"No possible way to lose"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
4/8
"Need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
Tags
Humor
this is a game thats really nifty cause all the people in it are popular.This game is especially made to combat Senoir Pat Roaches updated Crazy Pete.
It may seem like a pointless game to play but there is one hint in it, that might make it worth playing. ( this game is in no way my best work, you can't really choose your actions that well, but you can go through it, recognize some peeps, and use the comments section.
Yes this game is groundbreaking cause it was the first to use the comment section which is why it was pretty much made) IN ONE DAY HA HAH HAH HAH beat that JOHNY V
Player Comments
This was honestly pretty random to say the least. I did get a good portion of the pop culture references in this game, so there's that. The story in this was rather silly and nonsensical, but I can't say that the writing in this was too bad, although there were some issues with certain typos and grammar that I came across while reading this. Some proofreading would have went a long way with possibly fixing many of the errors that I came across.
Despite some of this game's flaws, this isn't something that I would call dull or uninteresting, because there's certainly some element of adventure with the choices that are presented to the reader in this storygame. So while this isn't the best in the technical sense, it's not bad in at least being something of a interesting read at the end of the day.
So not bad, but this also has some errors that are rather hard to overlook to truly enjoy what's here in this game. I just think that this could have been a bit more fulfilling if it wasn't a storygame that relied on being so random at times.
Overall, there is some promise shown in the writing of this game, but there's also quite a bit of bad here in this game as well.
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TharaApples
on 6/4/2017 11:59:01 PM with a score of 0
Just confusing. I had no idea what was going on half the time and the grammar and sentence structure was not that great. Also, I just did not get the plot of the game and even with the nice amount of options this game provided, it still felt lacking.
3/8
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JMgskills
on 5/2/2012 11:01:20 AM with a score of 0
An entertaining read that honestly isn’t as bad as people are saying it is. Sure it was grammatically eschewed and had a bunch not random pop culture icons show up, but for what it was I was amused. Though to be fair I skimmed a lot of it because some of the dialogue was cringey and hard to read.
It’s always interesting to dust off an old relic or remnant of the site or some game that had a promising start but was never finished. This falls in the former category and while it had some moments of random plot that really dragged the rating down since it lacked originality, it still seems like the author had a decent writing style it just needed to be channeled at something with a more original plot idea unlike this cluster of characters.
Overall the grammatical errors were few and the story had some amusing moments, but for me it was just too much at once.
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Axxius
on 4/14/2022 9:35:24 PM with a score of 0
It didn’t make much sense
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writeyourstory
on 10/7/2020 11:26:31 AM with a score of 0
This story made absolutely NO sense.
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AMuggleNerd
on 8/31/2019 8:44:45 AM with a score of 0
"Here we go again Wilma" Fred Shoughts." Ugh.
This story is horrendously bad and should never have been conceived. The only reasons I can think to why it hasn't been righteously erased from the face of this site is because of lacking 2001 standards and the fact the author is literally one of the creators of this site.
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AzBaz
on 12/9/2018 9:12:53 AM with a score of 0
Very random, but despite that (or more likely because of it), it's not very funny.
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Master_of_All4
on 9/16/2018 12:34:51 PM with a score of 0
I have... literally no idea what I just read...
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ViolinAndDeerstalker
on 6/10/2018 11:00:37 AM with a score of 0
I'd give it a 5-6 if it had good spelling because of that I give it a 3
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AurondragonTyr
on 10/17/2017 5:29:48 PM with a score of 0
I only actually read about 2 pages all the way through because your grammar was frankly atrocious. This concept could have worked? But... even your description is almost unreadable, before one even clicks "start game." Please consider redoing this with a special focus on formatting, spelling, and grammar...
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PhantomStylus
on 6/1/2017 1:34:01 PM with a score of 0
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