"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played times (finished )
"Walk in the park"
"Make sure not to blink"
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
A crazy man that needs help.
Wow! This was bad but really funny!
on 11/7/2009 6:30:56 PM with a score of 0
This is the greatest game CYS has EVER seen. I love this game.
on 4/9/2009 6:53:07 PM with a score of 0
You wake up ten years later at Mr. Crazy's personal burger king. He says hi and gives you a burger. after taking a bite, he mentions he dropped it in a toilet after using it. You then die.
— it on 1/26/2008 4:11:15 PM with a score of 0
on 1/16/2008 6:57:10 PM with a score of 0
You kept my attention for two pages... then I lost. That's way to quick of a loss. 2/8
on 1/3/2008 3:43:11 PM with a score of 0
You'd think that tylerm13 would be an upgrade from "12herda" but evidently not. I guess this fully answers the question of is 13 better then 12? You know the question that keeps you up at night.
on 12/16/2007 10:22:29 PM with a score of 0
1/8 what can I say about this game? I can't even think of anything to say about. Bad spelling, stupid plot, stupid game.
on 12/16/2007 12:51:34 PM with a score of 0
Too many misspellings, no dialogue, characters, plot, or satisfying ending.
on 12/14/2007 2:27:16 AM with a score of 0
I killed that mutherfcker better then they killed Caesar. Woot! Horrible game...
on 12/11/2007 11:59:39 PM with a score of 0
Stories with a Play Length of 1 will often get bad ratings. Choices need to have an interest to the player, and not seem like random actions thrown into a mix of random situations. However, you did have a lots of choices to make, lots of things to do, which is better than just having one choice on a page, so you're heading in the right direction by doing that. So, you just need to work on writing a more interesting, less random feeling story, and try for a longer length so there's some more content in it.
on 12/11/2007 6:26:41 PM with a score of 0
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