Player Comments on TRAPPED!!!

This was honestly quite fun to experience. The plot was rather random, but not too absurd in it's randomness that I found myself disliking the things that were occurring. This storygame holds up well in the aspects of being a game, and its rather fun. I didn't find this to be overly complicated or difficult in the way of advancing in towards the end, because more often than not the solution was one that could be found by simply exploring what this game had to offer.

The plot here is rather straightforward and simple, but wanting to defeat the antagonist is what drove me forward with each new page. The use of items that helped with that little endeavor I had in mind was done well. Though I do feel that the puzzles they were about to solve could have been slightly more challenging in nature. Still, the puzzles and this storygame was one that remained enjoyable for me throughout my reading.

All in all, this storygame is not one without its share of enjoyment to be had here. The story could have perhaps been a bit stronger in a sense, but other than that the writing is rather solid and I feel that this story is one that shouldn't so easily be passed up.

This does its job well as a fun game to kill some time with, and it also made me smile when I successfully beat it. ^-^

I was a little skeptical at first since the plot seemed really unlikely, but screw the plot--this is probably one of the best Humor and Puzzle games on this site xD
I mean, there were a few glitches here and there, but other than that, what's not to love?
It was very funny and puzzling (like I said earlier); It wasn't ridiculously easy but it wasn't ridiculously hard either. There were many ways to defeat the boss; not just one random combination (plus, on one combination you get to use hand on hand combat; I mean, how cool is that?!), and you have the option to skip a certain floor (But in doing so you risk not getting an object that may be helpful in defeating Morth).
Anyway, tl;dr: A few bugs, but still really awesome. 6/8

THIS GAME ROCKS! Excellent game, very very fun, wish there were more pictures though! This game is more of a puzzle game, as it's a giant maze and you need to do things sequentially, and I wish that you had to beat the first floor and THEN you could fight Morth but hey! I loved this game soooo much and totally recommend it!

I love this. This little game was so endearing. I loved all the pictures throughout it, especially the little map you had to navigate the maze. It reminds me of something I would've made when I was 12.

That was not the best but certainly not the worst so I gave it a 5. It was a little simple but fun maybe make the game harder

heh heh

;)

I LOVE ITTTTT !!!!!!!

Simple, entertaining, worth my time.

very gud game

Fuck yeah, Morth is dead!!!

Meh kinda stupid

Key 1 opens Floor 2, so you can skip various things

AWESOME!It's so fun. I mean I guess the stuff is a little easy but it's really fun. I died 2 or 3 times.

It was hilarious and really fun. It makes me wanna play it over and over again.

I won! The map was confusing, and the maze could’ve used some spots where one wrong answer wasn’t instant death, but it was interesting!

This was good and pretty funny, but there are mistakes. You don’t need to do anything on floor 3, and the final battle was giving me the option of using an item I didn’t have???

5/8

It was so much fun that we acted it out while playing it in our classroom, reinventing all of it as we went along killing "Pino" (THE NAME WE PLAYFULLY GAVE MORTH!)!!

Thank you for a fun time congratulating you for a great game,
Happy Llama

I won

It was gucci.

This was very fun. I loved collecting all the tools and objects, and I loved how using them was immediately an option, and I didn't have to click on each of them individually to use them. AWESOME JOB

I liked it

This was great. However, there is a loophole. You made the longshot available in the beginning of the boss battle, even though I hadn't gotten it from floor 2 because I used the ray gun to skip that floor.

It was quite fun!

6/8

Pretty darned fun actually.

FANTASTIC! Normally I only do romance stories but this has been the best one I've ever done!

it was a great game.

This story was great! I was a little bit confused about how to get the ray gun, but it was really fun.

Fair little game.

I liked this! It was fun to play, and had a nice floor system! (I beat the Mind Maze without the Map!)

i died lol

It seems like it would be good for kids.

Great game Mazeman!

nice!

Keep up the good work:)

There was a lack of choices. Irish it could have been a little harder. The story was straightforward, and got quick to the point. Overall good story!

So funny and fun! Good job on this wonderful storygame

That was really, really good.There was lots of humor, and though the vocabulary could be improved, it was a very well written storygame. There was lots to do and lots of items, lots of endings, too. (yes, I played through them all.)
Thank you for such an enjoyable game!

This is actually pretty funny and clever. Good job!

During the battle with Morth, it let me use items i didn't even get and i could go through one of the stairs without the key. Actually look back at it, please. Other then that, it's a great game.

HA! I BEAT IT! GOTTA GETTA WOOP WOOP, LOL I PLAY ANIMAL JAM THATS WHY I SAID THAT

It's quite fun, a few errors in the scripting (I got through floor 3 without getting the key). Good effort

I liked this, good fun :)

Lol, I blew up Morth with a bomb.

I like the concept of it. I died because a monster grabbed me when I threw a bomb at it. I like the irony that the mess the character got into is like a video game and he/she got into it because of videogames!

OK :/

Not bad

Hey, Lonnie Molkyri here!
I just wanted to tell you that this game was extremely fun; the only ting wrong with it, in my opinion, is that it ended (lol)!
Keep up the good work, and Keep on storygaming!

Good attempt at a more serious story! Just a redundant at times when it felt like a scavenger hunt.

oh my god, I had to keep playing until I won! took me forever!!!!!!!! awesome game though!

Before I became a member on this site, I read this storygame. It's good! (Better than those other ones you made)

Not bad. The story elements were fairly basic, but interesting use of the items. 5/8

Pretty cool!

This story was really cool. I had fun doing it! Please make more stories!

fun and adventurous! best story game I'VE ever played :D

Cool. I tried the bomb every opportunity I could find, but every time it didn't work, so I was surprised when it killed Morth in one try.

Very simple and fun!!

Good game. Not the most realistic, but definitely fun. Perhaps you should rate it one level higher in maturity...

Excellent use of items; most of the item puzzles could be solved with logic or exploration (or some combination of the two.)

It was AWESOME. It's good for people who want a nice, short and sweet game without going into detail wanting to read long pieces of text.

I died trying to defeat Morph though. Damn. Aw well, I might try again actually.

Seth says YES.

A bug, if I use Key 1, on door 2 it works.

Although I like your randomese stories better, this was still fun.^_^ nice puzzles, the only gripe I had was getting the map was useless. You needed the longshot to get over the hole, and the only way you could get to the hole was to complete the maze. Otherwise, nice job! Make more random ones please. :D

ok

Pretty cool

Wasn't much of a story, but the use of items was quite fun.

Take THAT floor 2!

This was an awesome game! Sure, I went back a couple times when I died, but it was great how you used objects. I loved this! it was short enough that it didn't bore me but long enough that I like I completed something!

There is a major bug! I can complete floor 3 without a key!

good game

This game is pretty good. I didn't get through the whole thing, but it had great use of the objects.

really cool! sorta hard though, check out giamonic's game

not bad, pretty entertaining

wow. beat it on my first try in 5 minutes. but it was STILL HARD!!!!

I won! That was cool!

I could get into the second key door without the second key, and also I never found the maze map. But this was good, I sort of preferred the day, but this was good. 7/8.

on key 2 you can just go to the stairs and use the first key, easy. then the map thing lies to you about what is what. all in all the game has some plot holes but its ok.

It was a good idea, but you used links instead of having the player actually use the items.

Very good in my opinion

I really like how there's different floors-"levels".

Great game, good job.

I WIIIIIIIIIII--LOSE! Tch, this was quite linear.

Does exactly what it says on the tin - pretty challenging and entertaining.

Awesome! the bomb can kill you OR help you...

Your best story by far! Nice pictures.

cool

I loved it! This is on my good list. A lovely front cover illustration.

Good use of items

Fun, complicated, and a good puzzle too!

Cool.

i never played far, but this game sure is good! Play it and you will understand!

Great job! Well written and fun to play. Good use of items. One error I found was that the "Use the other key" link on Floor 3 to get to Floor 2 can be clicked on even if you don't have the other key. And guess what - maniacally IS a word, and a great one for that point! Good job.

That was cool.

I like it :) Found it rather humorous

YES! I won! When the fav. games feature comes out, I'm putting this one on my list!

It resembles lgeend of zelda

one of the better puzzle style games on here.

This game sure does require a lot of thinking.

Somewhere in a chicago basement apartment, R.L. Stine weeps for the past.

its ok

i died!! why! its pritty good still. WHY ME!!

One of the best games on the site. Incredibly fun.

Pretty cool man!

Nice.

That was fun!

We are a bunch of crazy kids in Japan and one crazy man. The crazy man is Matthew, our English Teacher.

Thank you for creating this game. It was very fun. We liked killing Morth. It was fun to use a ray gun.

Yours truey, madly and weirdly,

Shin, Kanade, Daisuke, and Matthew. (and Momo, we don't know).

i read that book too, badger

THE... BEST... GAME.... ON... THE... SITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

One of the best games ever!

Interesting...hmmmm

On of the best games ive seen! this is a masterpiece! I would rank it along the Finals week, wal*mart game and Vengeance!

Awesome! But I bet you stole it from a Goosebumps Choose-Your-Own-Adventure Game: Into the Jaws of Doom,m which I also read!

Exellent

It,s cool!

unless you updated this game, THIS IS THE SAME GAME AS SOME OTHER ONE!!

This was a good game. Coming from me, be proud of yourself!

good game. there is one link were i coulda used longshot and i didnt have one though... its on floor 1, fix that.

This game ROCKS,but... I wonder... why Morth? And I don't know why... but this game reminds me of The Legend of Zelda games.

YAY! I've played this before but I don't care! I won again! Make a sequel where Morth comes back from the dead!!!! GREAT GAME!

I defeated him on my first try. I don't know how to get the items past floor 4.

Not really as good as my expectations from the comments but it was pretty good all the same...

That game was awseome!
Make another one please.

it was a good game thrilling but only slightly hehehe we kicked morths butt

That was an amazing game! I really liked it! But you shouldn't have put links saying to use this or that weapon, but to click on the item in the inventory menu and use it manually. This way, players will have to figure out when and where to use that item thus making the game harder and more fun!

Actually i thought it was quite good

Awesome game i think it could be longer though

no bad comments

Very good game! I liked it very much, but it WAS very confusing. I forgot to get the bug spray and had to restart, cause the bugs got me! lol. Overall, great game, should make a sequel where Morth comes back from the dead, or something like that!

WOW! I can tell a ton of work was put into this game! It was very fun and different!

Wow, great, great game. It was so much work to make it through the levels, I can't imagine how much time it took you to make. If anything, I've got to appreciate the effort put into making the game. Nice concept, with great visuals!

GOod game! One suggestion: It's too easy! Don't make options showing people what items they can use! Let them figure it out themselves.

You should make more adventure games! (you,re nearly as good as R.L Stine!)

You should make more adventure games! (you,re nearly as good as R.L Stine!)

Again, I've played the game. It is good. *Beavis and Butthead snicker*

nice game make more games like this

A very good story. This will be one of my favorites.

Awesome! The best I've seen in a while. I also like the Trying not to die part. Keep up the good work.

Awesome! The best I've seen in a while. I also like the Trying not to die part. Keep up the good work.

Very fun game. It held my interest (which is a little rare for just text-based games) and was entertaining. How about a sequel?

I liked it. It was really fun.

Yay!

That was a great game

I haven't played this game in a long time, but now I've replayed it and remember why I love it so much.

Ummmm... very interesting! It was a lil too easy tho, lol. Good job

wow. that was exciting, challenging, puzzling, and funnny. I liked how you made fun of your game in the game, like saying how it copied stuff. Sweet game, this should be on the top 5 tell you what.

This game is just awesome, well done , It's pretty smooth and fun to play.

good game

Very well done! I thought it was splendid! You have got to make another one.

Its REALLY fun. And u have 2 think. A good combo.

Good. Good. Good. What?

it was a great game!!! make a trapped!!!2 with more adventure luvd it

Great Game! Oh yeah, "MANIACALLY" IS A WORD! My brother looked it up!

Great Game

Awsome game.Very challenging.Make a part 2 With a robotic version of the villan and more gadgets.

its pretty fun

Great Job! Kinda Wacko, But hey, GREAT GAME!

I would rate this game a 123456789

This game is awesome! Make more of these to satisfy us adventure people!

Kind of a simple game but fun nonetheless. It reminds me of the Choose Your Own Adventure books I used to read. I beat Mort on my FIRST try!

Whoo hoo! I beat morth! My favorite part of the game was the mind maze. Well done! Thanks for the fun exciting trip to the museum!

Hey! That was really sweet, I was kinda expecting a goofy game (like yer others), but honest to goodness, that was good stuff! Especially the Maze sequence in the Human Mind area. The map was pretty well done.<br><br>Also, good pictures on the items! I really like seeing that as opposed to that lame treasurechest thingy. Good stuff!

Not bad. Its clear you put some thought into this. Though its also clear that you've borrowed heavily from give yourself gossebumps and lightlty from Zelda :) .<br>I see this a lotlike the the GYSG book where your in the shopping mall and also the one where you in the garden centre.<br>I would say the game is only slighlty above average, though the final battle is cool (I like the way there are so many choices and ways to beat him). <br>If you make more, add some puzzles that require thought (like the ones in the shopping mall book).

i was expecting a gay puzzle game, but what i got was a fun, exciting trip to the Museum overrun by Morth! <br>it was a great plot, great game!<br>make a sequel!

AWESOME GAME<br><br>I recommend every body play it. March put this on the top 5. Its really fun.<br>I really loved and enjoyed it.<br>Make a sequel!

Alright, the game was GREAT. One thing. When I use a weapon on the last page, And theres a long list of all the items, I didnt have the longshot and I was able to use it. Maybe you should fix that. (I skipped through the gate and went staright to morth)<br><br>Alot like Legend Of Zelda. lol. VERY COOL!

it rocked.

This game was very fun. Quite a different game compared to Mazeman's previous games, but it had humor and it was just real fun to play!