"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 346 times (finished 58)
"trek through the forest"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
My Theater 25AC Midterm Part III
It's not too bad, actually.
Not too hard, not too easy, funny enough and short enough so I don't get bored.
Grammar, punctuation, etc, was pretty good, everything else was also.
I rated a 6, because it was pretty short-lived. Added some more I would've done 8.
on 5/3/2019 3:44:21 PM with a score of 0
Holy fuck I laughed at that persona thing. Immersive. I appreciate it.
on 4/25/2019 7:48:07 AM with a score of 0
Of course the first choice I made was to wear chaps when choosing my pants to wear, mainly because the thought of me wearing that AS pants with my crotch open to the sun an the breeze was rather amusing.
The rest of the story was otherwise mildly amusing and was grammatically decent. There was one spot in when you go to investigate in the cave, I believe, which ends up looping back to the town with no explanation. I would have liked the bit about the liberation expanded upon. There were a lot of questions left unanswered for what seemed to have been set up as a primary conflict. Some more focus on that could have made this story stand out a lot more.
This was not bad for a first story, and I hope the author continues writing.
on 4/23/2019 2:19:04 AM with a score of 0
"Well things sure did work out well for you. You are lucky that women exist solely for the purpose of finding a man and living together with him, and that there is no possible alternative to that.
The woman you propose to and marry (whose name you did not even learn) happily gives up trying to run the ranch on her own and lets you take over. Under your strong, manly hands, the soil becomes bountiful and you become quite a wealthy man. You live out the rest of your days happily before passing away at the age of 65 due to pneumonia."
lol the best and only ending
on 4/9/2019 4:46:50 PM with a score of 0
-- Ihdfk on 4/9/2019 2:06:48 PM with a score of 0
So short and doesn't let you choose much. It's boring.
-- YeeHaw on 4/9/2019 1:15:33 PM with a score of 0
yee (and i cannot stress this enough) HAW
on 4/1/2019 2:33:21 PM with a score of 0
I actually quite enjoyed that... The subtle racism and misogyny were fun. ^_^
on 3/31/2019 6:10:14 PM with a score of 0
Haha! As someone from Texas, I sure got a kick out of this one. Not shabby! Though it is one of those clickthrough style games, I honestly wasn’t too irritated. It would have been the icing on the cake if there were a little more detailing and plot, as most of it (in my ending) was about the Indians up north and getting home.
This one made me laugh... Good one. Perfect to read if you’re looking for a pick me up.
on 3/16/2019 11:52:13 PM with a score of 0
I think that you messed up when linking pages. When you go to investigate the ruins, it gives the option to enter the trap door, but when you enter it brings you back to the old man. Pretty fun, and 14 endings is not bad.
on 3/14/2019 12:44:19 PM with a score of 0
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