YeeHaw

It's not too bad, actually.
Not too hard, not too easy, funny enough and short enough so I don't get bored.
Grammar, punctuation, etc, was pretty good, everything else was also.

I rated a 6, because it was pretty short-lived. Added some more I would've done 8.

Holy fuck I laughed at that persona thing. Immersive. I appreciate it.

10/10

Of course the first choice I made was to wear chaps when choosing my pants to wear, mainly because the thought of me wearing that AS pants with my crotch open to the sun an the breeze was rather amusing.

The rest of the story was otherwise mildly amusing and was grammatically decent. There was one spot in when you go to investigate in the cave, I believe, which ends up looping back to the town with no explanation. I would have liked the bit about the liberation expanded upon. There were a lot of questions left unanswered for what seemed to have been set up as a primary conflict. Some more focus on that could have made this story stand out a lot more.

This was not bad for a first story, and I hope the author continues writing.

"Well things sure did work out well for you. You are lucky that women exist solely for the purpose of finding a man and living together with him, and that there is no possible alternative to that.



The woman you propose to and marry (whose name you did not even learn) happily gives up trying to run the ranch on her own and lets you take over. Under your strong, manly hands, the soil becomes bountiful and you become quite a wealthy man. You live out the rest of your days happily before passing away at the age of 65 due to pneumonia."

lol the best and only ending

Interesting.

So short and doesn't let you choose much. It's boring.

yee (and i cannot stress this enough) HAW

I actually quite enjoyed that... The subtle racism and misogyny were fun. ^_^

Haha! As someone from Texas, I sure got a kick out of this one. Not shabby! Though it is one of those clickthrough style games, I honestly wasn’t too irritated. It would have been the icing on the cake if there were a little more detailing and plot, as most of it (in my ending) was about the Indians up north and getting home.

This one made me laugh... Good one. Perfect to read if you’re looking for a pick me up.

I think that you messed up when linking pages. When you go to investigate the ruins, it gives the option to enter the trap door, but when you enter it brings you back to the old man. Pretty fun, and 14 endings is not bad.