YeeHaw

Correction to my previous comment: It was extensive given the length because each page was so short there were more branches I expected seeing the original length

The branching was extensive, and I like how even if it was unrealistic at times, it was still fun. I particularly enjoyed the "tongue in cheek" ending where the girl asks you, "You think you can just go up to a random girl and ask her to marry you" and you respond "Well, it's the Wild West isn't it, so yes", and then you two get married. That was funny.

kinda fun. hilarious that there was only one personality of 'rugged individual'

Played this game cos of a survey I was forced to fill out

The ending I got is hilariously bad

YeeHaw

The random-story button did not disappoint. Yee-friggin'-Haw!

It's not too bad, actually.
Not too hard, not too easy, funny enough and short enough so I don't get bored.
Grammar, punctuation, etc, was pretty good, everything else was also.

I rated a 6, because it was pretty short-lived. Added some more I would've done 8.

Holy fuck I laughed at that persona thing. Immersive. I appreciate it.

10/10

Of course the first choice I made was to wear chaps when choosing my pants to wear, mainly because the thought of me wearing that AS pants with my crotch open to the sun an the breeze was rather amusing.

The rest of the story was otherwise mildly amusing and was grammatically decent. There was one spot in when you go to investigate in the cave, I believe, which ends up looping back to the town with no explanation. I would have liked the bit about the liberation expanded upon. There were a lot of questions left unanswered for what seemed to have been set up as a primary conflict. Some more focus on that could have made this story stand out a lot more.

This was not bad for a first story, and I hope the author continues writing.