In School Suspension

Hey, this was actually pretty funny. I must tip my hat off to you in making such a humorous storygame that can be described as 'random' but that wasn't much of a issue as the story was written very well and the presentation was rather solid.

Grammar and punctuation wise, this story did quite well on that front as well. I also enjoyed the premise of being a degenerate of sorts, it was able to provide many scenes that offered plenty of laughs to be had.

My only complaint is that some of the choices didn't really matter, as the story would progress the same regardless of the choice that was chosen, this was also a bit short length wise too. I wouldn't of minded having a longer storygame to read through, because it certainly would've been fun to experience more.

As the storygame is now, it's only rather decent. Obviously in a technical sense, this shines, but this storygame almost lacks too much to truly make it satisfying in the end.

Choices are rather important, and I felt like I was reading a very funny storygame rather than playing one, if that makes any sense.

Still, this was funny and it made me laugh. So thanks for the rather fascinating read.

6/8
This story was actually funny as hell.

This is probably one of the best random stories I've ever read, was really funny.

Pretty good. Honestly though I only gave it the rating I did because it wasn't total shit.

This storygame was really enjoyable. It was funny and pretty well written, but left me wanting more.

The story was well done and I felt the characters were very relatable. I enjoyed the humorous scenarios that occurred during the course of the story and was quite interested to try all available paths.

However, some of the choices either did not matter, or looped you back into the main narrative. While they provided a slightly different perspective, it did not feel like those choices made any difference to the outcome.

I really enjoyed the way the story was written, and wish that there was much more to it. The in school suspension did not last long enough.

Overall, this storygame was fun and enjoyable, but way too short.

What a fun game!

Okay, but too short.

A fine story indeed. Didn't make it too far, got booted out for attempting to do homework, but I enjoyed my time nonetheless.

I enjoyed the execution of the premise and the main character the most.

Kinda vague but like the "You get killed by a spinning pen" part (=

Yeah as if I even care but it was pretty amazing